i really like doing these vector style sigs, please point out my flaws.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i have a kirby fetish

The only flaw I see is that it looks too boring and simple. Other than that, everything else looks alright.

I agree with Promise. Looks bland and unoriginal. As for vector looking...yeah it is alright ot reat but meh. Can't give any realy c/c because it does't really need any. Average piece really.

1: Quite bland and boring, fortunately it does have some flow. The animation could be worse, but it does seem like a cheap way to fill the empty background space. Render placement/composition needs work too.

 

 

 

2: Slightly better because it isn't so empty, but still not very interesting. The black line needs to go or at least it should be recoloured to blue-ish or something else that fits.

meh, those things aren't to bad, as most of them were intentional

 

 

 

i wanted both pieces to be simple

 

and i agree with the animation... i was really shaky about it

 

and maybe either turn the black line bluish or make the BG incorporate more black

 

 

 

thanks for the help

the antialiasing on the first one is a bit off... i can see sharp pixels on those circles

^I think that is because it is saved as a .GIF, that the indexed colors make them look pixelated. This could be solved by saving the original animation as APNG.