yaff2 Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 Hey guys, so for my art class, i have been drawing Pokemon's, Mudkips and Geodudes. And now we have to do a painting, but the teacher wouldnt let me paint a pokemon that was already created, so a buddy of mine came up with the idea of a Geokip... Geodude and a Mudkip combined. Then another buddy of mine helped me with an idea on a image, This is where you guys come in, i ow need your help! I have the character drawn, and colored, roughly done as its a WIP still. But the mouth i think looks funny, so i need your help to decide if i should add an actual mouth, with a tongue. so here is the design without a mouth and tongue And a non colored version with a mouth an tongue *didnt color* I need your help to decide whether or not to add the mouth and tongue to the colored version... please help me! *PS* Crappy scanner, colors and lines are bad, looks way better in real life, and its just roughly done as of now 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baconxl Posted September 22, 2008 Share Posted September 22, 2008 About the one without the mouth the piece hanging down looks more like a beard of some sort...The one with the mouth does look a little weird, well the mouth part at least. It just looks like it just comes out of nowhere and doesn't really have a top to the mouth or anything. I'd say keep the mouth and fix it or lose that piece that hangs below his chin or whatever it is. But that's just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 22, 2008 Author Share Posted September 22, 2008 How would i fix it then? 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tripsis Posted September 22, 2008 Share Posted September 22, 2008 I personally think that the main problem is that in the second image, the mouth seems to extend way too far (almost as if the jaw bone has been broken). Rather than redesigning the mouth, I would just change how it looks in the second image. I think it would look fine if you only opened it slightly and maybe exposed some teeth, with the tongue slightly visible. But the mouth looks perfectly fine in the first image. The problem is just how you designed it to open in the second one. - 99 fletching | 99 thieving | 99 construction | 99 herblore | 99 smithing | 99 woodcutting - - 99 runecrafting - 99 prayer - 125 combat - 95 farming - - Blog - DeviantART - Book Reviews & Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 22, 2008 Author Share Posted September 22, 2008 Kinda like this? just, better :P 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted September 22, 2008 Share Posted September 22, 2008 Lol geodude. I'd say the lower jaw looks a bit weird. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted September 22, 2008 Share Posted September 22, 2008 Kinda like this? just, better :P [hide=Image][/hide] When coloured and everything that would look make a pretty good mouth IMO. Geokip FTW. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted September 22, 2008 Share Posted September 22, 2008 What a coinkydink! In art class we had a selection of 5 pokemon to draw. The teacher chose the crap ones -.- . To me, right now the actual geokip looks fairly simple. Will you be having shading and stuff? And the mouth jopie was talking about will do fine imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted September 22, 2008 Author Share Posted September 22, 2008 alright WELL! i have changed it up a bit, and the mouth looks good, and now im adding a background to it! i will scan and post it when i got the rough idea done! 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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