(edited the whip)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

this is my 5 pixel ive done. it took me like 2 days to finish and i wouls like to know som area's for improvement

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

please give me some c/c and a rank

Change the BG color or the wip color

it looks good, maybe work a little more on the shading porpotions and the clashing of the whip and the bg.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also the cape looks as if its flying... it doesnt look like its attached to the character, perhaps work on that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also please please please change the font lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

great work so far, hope this helped a little

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~jlr

8/10. I really like it. It's good for a fifth... The shading sort of reminds me of Godslayer's earlier work for some reason.. XD. Looks good.

thanx. i added the hair last and it has coverd the bit of the cape that was attatched to the sholders. i edited the colour of the whip but i made the HUGE mistake of saving the writing on the good copy of the image so it will take a bit of work to fix it up :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i cant5 do any now cause im goin out so lol. ill do it later

great work, cant wait to see the finished product.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~jlr

shading = excellent. That's some really nice work, that must have ataken a really long time.

 

 

 

The whip = not so excellent, the lines aren't nice, and there's only 2 colours. All you need to do is work on your linework, and you'll be set :D

The only part I truly like is his cape, which at the same time is out of place, it wouldnt billow back so much. Other than that, your shading is dubious (do you really need that many shades?), and your lineart needs work.

Just noticed this - You spelled Damn wrong. (And if that word's censored, you need to add an N on the "Dee Ay Emm" word.

The only part I truly like is his cape, which at the same time is out of place, it wouldnt billow back so much. Other than that, your shading is dubious (do you really need that many shades?), and your lineart needs work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeah the character looks a little bit like the tin man... very stiff,flat, and straight... Just needs a little more practice. ur doing great as of this point dude, just keep taking the advice people give u and turn it into something great!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~jlr

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ive tried to fix most things. what exactly did u mean godslayer? and yea he does look like a rune tin man.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im not so good at line art and i changed it a whole lot while i was shading it and i still couldnt get the right leg look right :S

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanx for all the prais ppl :D

cape look's ok if it was attached to him but the armour reminds me of tin man of wizard of oz shading on its good though

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol. ive tried to fix the cape but the hair is in thw way of where i fastened it. theres like little brass clips if u look close enoug and i moved in a bit

the fire looks awsome :D

thanx, it took a while to do it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

100TH POST !!! :D :D :D :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ive tried to make him look more 3D with new legs and shaded them so it kinda looks like there coming to the screen. i got rid of the hair and tried to fix the cape

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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i rounded off the body plate so it didnt look as "tin manish"

 

 

 

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moved the cape cause it was too high and also changed the body again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

unless theres any objections i think its as good as it will get :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

now time to get going on my next one... mabye a head on a pike with fire or something