Geoff Owns Posted December 25, 2008 Share Posted December 25, 2008 Need some C/C to make it better 94/99 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaphias Posted December 25, 2008 Share Posted December 25, 2008 Try blending the render in more. Around some edges, it look like it was just cut out and slapped on. Blending merges the background to the render. A better choice of text this time, but still not perfect... Personally, I think the text you used in your current signature was the best text to sig match you've done so far. But maybe that's just me. You're progressing well, keep it up! 8,325th to 99 Firemaking 3/9/08 | 44,811th to 99 Cooking 7/16/084,968th to 99 Farming 10/9/09 | Runescaper August 2005-March 2010Tip.it Mod Feb. 2008-Sep. 2008 | Tip.it Crew Sep. 2008-Nov. 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geoff Owns Posted December 25, 2008 Author Share Posted December 25, 2008 Thanks, the problem is my parents are split up and I go back and forth between households, so I can't always work with the same materials, I made a sick brush at my dads and i cant seem to make another like it :( o well ill keep trying ill have something wicked before Christmas :P If any one has any homemade smudge brushes that they find really good could you like some how save them like they do on deviant and send it to me? :? 94/99 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaphias Posted December 25, 2008 Share Posted December 25, 2008 Thanks, the problem is my parents are split up and I go back and forth between households, so I can't always work with the same materials, I made a sick brush at my dads and i cant seem to make another like it :( o well ill keep trying ill have something wicked before Christmas :P If any one has any homemade smudge brushes that they find really good could you like some how save them like they do on deviant and send it to me? :? If you haven't already, you may want to invest in a jump drive/zip drive/whatever people call em. That way, you can just stick all your work, brushes, renders... anything else you may need onto it and carry it between households. Works great. :thumbup: 8,325th to 99 Firemaking 3/9/08 | 44,811th to 99 Cooking 7/16/084,968th to 99 Farming 10/9/09 | Runescaper August 2005-March 2010Tip.it Mod Feb. 2008-Sep. 2008 | Tip.it Crew Sep. 2008-Nov. 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geoff Owns Posted December 25, 2008 Author Share Posted December 25, 2008 Yea I have A Flash Drive, Ill start using it. What did I tell you, 6 minutes until Christmas and I got a good one.....IMO :lol: 94/99 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted December 25, 2008 Share Posted December 25, 2008 The smudging feels too rough in my opinion and I would remove some of it that's north/east of the text so the stock get's a little nicer. I would also remove the lensflare as the white colour doesn't work well the signature (Yet again in my opinion). Also, never use the dropshadow on your text. The placement of the smudging is pretty good if you ask me I just think that it's slightly too much on the render (Specially the left (the renders left) shoulder). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted December 25, 2008 Share Posted December 25, 2008 Though he has made good use of the lens flare, you've seen how the light is cast on Samus and positioned the lens flare accordingly :thumbup: Though I wouldn't get into the habit of using it. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pryomancer Posted December 25, 2008 Share Posted December 25, 2008 It's been deleted. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M_u_s_ii_X Posted December 25, 2008 Share Posted December 25, 2008 It's been deleted. :( Its up above my post. :D In my opinion its way to smudged. :/ ⅹ Last.fm YouTube Team A vs Team B M u s ii X Rocky Keane ⅹ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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