Pat_61 Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Well I took the advice to read tuts and try to do it not step by step and I got.... I think I got flow down. Not sure about rule of thirds though.... think im pretty close. Also what is the samuri guy in the I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DingoAte Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 I think the flow should be following the direction of the hand, just a guess :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Ro3rds - Yes. Flow - No. C4d Spam - No Naruto = Noplz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted February 8, 2009 Author Share Posted February 8, 2009 Ro3rds - Yes. Flow - No. C4d Spam - No Naruto = Noplz. Wait so I got all but flow? yeah, i couldn't finding anything else for render that I already had. Could someone mark it up for the flow I swear it is correct... I'll try to make a mark up of what I think. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 Yo udon't have "correct" flow. Flow is something which helps everything aesthetically. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 White line=Your attempt to establish flow Pink line=Line of action of render See how it conflicts with your C4d? No flow line should cross the line of action. Remember that you build the sig to fit the render. Use the line of action as your key to establish proper flow. Trace it out if you need to. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 It's definitely a step up, and it's good to see you try something different than the standard filter background + render thing. I also like the depth you created on the render, but it looks quite weird combined with the C4D in the background, because the C4D doesn't really have much depth to it. But apart from the flow issue, there aren't that many problems at all, so good job. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted February 8, 2009 Author Share Posted February 8, 2009 Ok, thanks guys, Ill redo the C4D to fit the flow. and I'll try to fix that depth thing joipe. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted February 8, 2009 Share Posted February 8, 2009 your last one was MUCH MUCH better. this just looks like a simple backgrounf, with a sharpened C4D and a render. Then some random lines penciled on there 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted February 8, 2009 Author Share Posted February 8, 2009 Wow lol yaff likes the old one when everyone else likes the new one :lol: I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mister_moocky Posted February 9, 2009 Share Posted February 9, 2009 -The.. thing in the background looks either poorly cut out, or you messed up the AAing. The black line is too hard. -The render is too blury, except for the hand, which is over sharpened. -His hair [bleep]es also have hard-ish edges. quit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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