February 8, 200917 yr Well I took the advice to read tuts and try to do it not step by step and I got.... I think I got flow down. Not sure about rule of thirds though.... think im pretty close. Also what is the samuri guy in the I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van.
February 8, 200917 yr I think the flow should be following the direction of the hand, just a guess :oops:
February 8, 200917 yr Author Ro3rds - Yes. Flow - No. C4d Spam - No Naruto = Noplz. Wait so I got all but flow? yeah, i couldn't finding anything else for render that I already had. Could someone mark it up for the flow I swear it is correct... I'll try to make a mark up of what I think. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van.
February 8, 200917 yr Yo udon't have "correct" flow. Flow is something which helps everything aesthetically.
February 8, 200917 yr White line=Your attempt to establish flow Pink line=Line of action of render See how it conflicts with your C4d? No flow line should cross the line of action. Remember that you build the sig to fit the render. Use the line of action as your key to establish proper flow. Trace it out if you need to. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day
February 8, 200917 yr It's definitely a step up, and it's good to see you try something different than the standard filter background + render thing. I also like the depth you created on the render, but it looks quite weird combined with the C4D in the background, because the C4D doesn't really have much depth to it. But apart from the flow issue, there aren't that many problems at all, so good job. pixel avvy by me deviantART
February 8, 200917 yr Author Ok, thanks guys, Ill redo the C4D to fit the flow. and I'll try to fix that depth thing joipe. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van.
February 8, 200917 yr your last one was MUCH MUCH better. this just looks like a simple backgrounf, with a sharpened C4D and a render. Then some random lines penciled on there 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
February 8, 200917 yr Author Wow lol yaff likes the old one when everyone else likes the new one :lol: I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van.
February 9, 200917 yr -The.. thing in the background looks either poorly cut out, or you messed up the AAing. The black line is too hard. -The render is too blury, except for the hand, which is over sharpened. -His hair [bleep]es also have hard-ish edges. quit
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