February 11, 200917 yr Well For a dA I entering a contest with the theme of CANDY. Hows it look? I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van.
February 11, 200917 yr its looking good but i have noticed some problems. i will edit this when i get my example done EDIT These are just some of the things i noticed. i hope it helps 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
February 11, 200917 yr Too nice and clean. Crinkle the wrapper up a bit and had some depth to the chocolatte blocks. ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢ CAUTION ☢
February 11, 200917 yr Packaging looks pretty good but I'd add tad more detail on the folded up part. Most was pointed out by Yaff and Star already.
February 11, 200917 yr Author Thanks yaff for the mark-up and everyone else. Will post a new one tonight. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van.
February 11, 200917 yr my only suggestion that hasn't been said yet is to clean up the text where it says the weight and all that. something is a bit off about it, should look cleaner/clearer. [hide=WOO TEXT! updated Jan 19, 2009 (last quote)] And Evil you mad bastard. You are definately bringing TET back up to it's glory. No doubt about it. Keep it going champ.24,485th to 99 defence on 7-23-08I always forget you're 20 too. I always think you're 25 or something. o.oYa think that I'm insane, Its not sane... its not saneobligitory devart link: http://evil-mumm-ra.deviantart.com/Pogonophobia is the fear of beards.She isn't naked so it's legal.I'm a porn star.[/hide]
February 15, 200917 yr Author New one. I found out that my ref showed it like that(Slants) and I dont want to redo alot of the things. Might be last. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van.
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