Ouchy Posted March 13, 2009 Share Posted March 13, 2009 Dammit, on a downwards spiral at the moment :| Help me improve, this hideous eye sore :| My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted March 13, 2009 Share Posted March 13, 2009 TBH, that isn't that bad. The colours are a bit iffy, and it looks over filtery, but there is good flow, and this is something which could definitely be improved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted March 13, 2009 Author Share Posted March 13, 2009 Sorry if this comes across wrong, but what can be improved? My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mister_moocky Posted March 13, 2009 Share Posted March 13, 2009 Red, yellow, orange, green, blue, and purple. Interesting colour scheme :shock:. quit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted March 13, 2009 Author Share Posted March 13, 2009 Red, yellow, orange, green, blue, and purple. Interesting colour scheme :shock:. Yeap ;) When I was going to finish that, if it even merits being finished, then it would be called Aura ;) My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted March 13, 2009 Share Posted March 13, 2009 I like it! but take out the moon looking things. IMO they are terrible 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted March 13, 2009 Share Posted March 13, 2009 I like it! but take out the moon looking things. IMO they are terrible Yeah they're really distracting, I agree. It needs more of a focus, right now I think it is too reliant on the character being an easy focus but you don't really have any lead into it. The colors just seem really murky too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted March 14, 2009 Author Share Posted March 14, 2009 Hey, I got it finished! How does this look? My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted March 14, 2009 Share Posted March 14, 2009 still looks decent but i prefer the original. just take out the moon things but leave the colors. 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted March 14, 2009 Author Share Posted March 14, 2009 still looks decent but i prefer the original. just take out the moon things but leave the colors. Wha? I complete removed the "Moon thing" My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted March 14, 2009 Share Posted March 14, 2009 no i mean on the first, leave it the same, just without the moon things 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Braindead Posted March 14, 2009 Share Posted March 14, 2009 Personnaly I find this little dot of light a littel distracting. Dunno what else to say lol. Cooking cape achived 25.06.2008 19:12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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