JD77 Posted August 16, 2005 Share Posted August 16, 2005 Well some ppl have seen FFS 2.0 thats the one that loocked really cartoonish but we decided to make an new1 soo FFS 3.0! lol http://www.futureflashstudio [LikelyScam] in the flash section theres a flash i made too rate if u want here lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
____ Posted August 17, 2005 Share Posted August 17, 2005 Template or mess of Flash animations? It's a mess. Remove some of the pointless stuff and make it cleaner. I'll admit that I'm not a fan of flash websites but that one is just... ugh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted August 17, 2005 Share Posted August 17, 2005 Template or mess of Flash animations? It's a mess. Remove some of the pointless stuff and make it cleaner. I'll admit that I'm not a fan of flash websites but that one is just... ugh. Yeah, its a bit crowded, you should remove some of the animation, but I like the template. Good Job in the site. Keep improving! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JD77 Posted August 17, 2005 Author Share Posted August 17, 2005 thx komodo and its not a flash mess lol it only has like 6 flash thing per page lol the jukebox,the main buttons, the affiliates, the main content and 2 animations on the sides. i did those 2 animations cause its entertains while u look at the site lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hannibal Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 7 flash items and 2 paragraphs of html text. Way to go! Now please be serious about your submission or I'll be forced to laugh you out of this place. What? You were serious? *laughs* Right, so I suppose you want some serious CC? First of all, do something else, please. The web has enough dumb designers who think people need to be 'entertained' (read: annoyed/suffer from epileptic attacks) when actually trying to read content on a page (given, a template lacks content. But someone using the template will add content. They want that content read, so the page must be void of dumb flash animations) Second of all, ditch the flash. All of it. Proceed to learn css and how to make animated gifs (even those are evil, but if you insist on animation, I'll live with them). Don't put 'music' on your webpage, I don't need my own choice of music mixed with age-old mario sounds. It's childish. All in all, you don't need flash for this template. At all. Thirdly, stop using frames! Damnit, this looks like a page specifically designed to unite all evil-ness in internet-land. Oh wait, you've declared a doctype. The correct doctype, no less. Good on you, my boy, except that I strongly suspect you're using a wysiwyg editor, meaning you probably don't have an f-ing clue what a doctype is, anyway. The fact that your html doesn't validate would be point 4, fix that. In addition, just for fun, make it AAA-accessibility compliant. Just to have you make an effort, for a change. Point number 5, did you ever consider that your site might look more professional if you (a) put actual work in the images you use (don't fill up letters randomly, it looks dumb, don't use the same gradient on every heading) and (B) don't make spelling mistakes in your texts? Point number 6, skin your forum to fit in with your template Point number 7, Remove the pointless phpBB addons (shoutbox, 'games', et al.) Point number 8, actually, remove the entire forum - it serves no purpose. The only (active) members are the site admins. Ergo, pointless. And unprofessional. On to number 9: affiliating yourself with a site that looks like crap in any standards-capable browser (for what it's worth, that does not include IE), that uses frames, and *gasp*, dare I say it, the evil that is , /and/ uses a script to break into frames, ... is a bad idea. A /very/ bad idea. If you designed that site too then, well, I'm afraid there is little hope for you. And the last one in my burning top 10, don't break the back button, and don't use the 'zing' sounds whenever I hover over something. It's annoying! As a bonus number 11, did you ever consider it might be frustrating for people to load all those flashes? it makes your site slow, and cpu and memory-intensive. Altogether, a pita to use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercifull Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 Hannibal really said what i was thinking but ill go itno a tiny bit more detail about your forum. Why do you even have one? Can you actually find a proper answer to that? Theres only 3 of your staff, your site is very small and has very little content. There is really no valid reason for you to have a forum. Everyone seems obsessed with having a forum on every tiny little site whether it really needs one or not. Your site most certainly does NOT need a forum and especually not one with loads of stupid and pointless modifications. Delete your forum and totally remake your site. I like the idea of showing off some of your flash on the sites of the page but maybe you can have them as static jpg images and if you click them then it takes you to the flash movie. Im getting dizzy just looking at the front page with all these animations going off at once. Its terrible Change the font in your flash movies because in the exporting of the movie the font is messing up and flash is filling in D's and stuff. Take out the affiliates. What is it with nooby people's sites and wanting to "affiliate" with loads of other sites? Why not just have a "links" page :-/ Meh i could go on for ages detailing all the bad stuff on this "template" but i think you need ot work on some of the stuff that Hannibal and me said first before fixing all the other problems you have with it. Mercifull <3 Suzi "We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoRnMaN Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 my new template!just glad i didnt see the old one... im also making a website. i could come up with what u have in mere moments. dont just put it together, look around and see what people like. and what people dont like (people DONT like annoying sounds or images). i have spent the past week looking at templates and making templates. i suggest u do the same. but im surprise u had the guts to show it at tipit. man i wouldnt be able to do that, well not till i got some good reviews. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JD77 Posted August 19, 2005 Author Share Posted August 19, 2005 THX alot for the comments and im new this is like a beta and the forum isnt done yet i havent invited ppl lol and im mostly an flash animator lol so dont cretisice my html lol cause im new. THX A LOT :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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