Weren't expecting that, eh?

 

 

 

Tried to censor it as much as possible :P (warning, there will be less censoring on the next one)

 

 

 

EDIT: added some make-shift shading

ooh :P

 

 

 

All I can say is: work on your anatomy.

Anatomy needs major work. Right now it looks like you drew her nekkid for the sake of being nekkid.

Yeah, Tbh I diddnt use a frame where I should have, It was more of an elaborated doodle.

 

 

 

(I'm trying to achieve accurate anatomy without a frame, it just speeds things up, a little hard though, I always end up stretching female characters)

 

 

 

What makes things more difficult is that I refuse to use reference images even though my friend is like: "USE REFERENCE IMAGES DAMMIT, YOU WILL IMPROVE FASTER", yes faster, but then I would be consciously appropriating someone else and I don't like that... even though it's a legit practise. (most people do it - thus a flooding of styles that look exactly the same as each other)

 

 

 

Has anyone got any A3 paper? lol, seriously A4 is too small.

take away those arms

 

 

 

I think her right hand looks a bit rushed/unnatural

Just steal some A3 paper from school, claiming that you need it for your art lesson. That's what I did :P