well since i didnt have an avatar i decided to do one for me,

 

 

 

 

 

 

rate pl0x?

Looks terrific. :)

Nice avvy, no crits to make.

His armpits are way too far up, he has no face, and it seems pillow shaded?

Nooo, not t3h pillow!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think its good, bg is a bit light, but makes the pic stand out more I guess, Theres a bit of symmetry prollems on the lower portion of the helm, but not much other than that :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272

His armpits are way too far up, he has no face, and it seems pillow shaded?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:o i hadnt noticed the armpits, true they are a bit up, and he has no face because he wasnt supposed to have no face but dunno, pillow shaded?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: ok i did some changes to it, basically all i did was lower his arms and add a face and kept the same eyes, didnt touch the shading tho, are arms ok or still need more lowering? :?

 

 

 

Do you know what pillow shading is? :oops: If not, I can demonstrate so you know what to change. I forgot not everyone uses these terms...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, make the eyes stand out more and break up the gradient look on his face.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

His armpits are still to far up, take them out entirely.

http://www.natomic.com/hosted/marks/mpat/shading.html

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

k.

Pillow shading adds affect to shiny metal surfaces in my opinion, add a very close to white line in the reflections though.. Nice.

Looks pretty cool, dude.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice.