Aeriath Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 Well, I finished this one eventually (http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=312165&start=0) and moved onto my next project, a cooking sig: It's a WIP, so feel free to CC and tear it apart if you really feel like it. All comments appreciated. Curse you Nomad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altkill Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 A good catchphrase such as "99 Cooking" would be good I suppose. I like it, maybe a book on cooking shark thrown in a bin, shows you just bung it in the microwave. Alt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldeon Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 Nice although it looks odd wiht the head cropped off i really think you should have his head. It looks like you were too lazy to make one or coulnd't get a good looking head and face. number rating 8.5/10 light source is also not consistent considering it came from front left, the shadow from the microwave would be on the other side. There should also pe another light source from outside(sun) which would make the fence cast shadows and possibly the door frame depending on where the light is placed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runescape_rocks Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 I know nothing about pixel sigs, but I think that guys legs and feet are at a weird angle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeriath Posted August 28, 2005 Author Share Posted August 28, 2005 Altkill ~ I'm actually making the sig for when I set my goal of 80 cooking, and I like the bin idea. Aldeon ~ The head, I really should fix that. I planned to include one, but I ran out of space. I'm gonna edit that soon. I've never been good at lightsource, so I'll take your advice. runescape_rocks ~ I think I'll fix that too, the knee is bothering me. Curse you Nomad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkULLEDPK3R Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 GOD IM GETTING HUNGRY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apinagez Posted August 28, 2005 Share Posted August 28, 2005 GOD IM GETTING HUNGRY So hungry that you could eat a whole co...shark? :lol: Nice idea, however, you could improve a little bit the details :wink: ^The most disturbing signature on Tip.it^Last.fm|HELLY KAYLA!|Oh the mehagurtz!|#Siencemakers"they care less about their spelling mistakes then I." - Lionheart"apinagez... let me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 GOD IM GETTING HUNGRY So hungry that you could eat a whole co...shark? :lol: Nice idea, however, you could improve a little bit the details :wink: Eat a co......? LOL Its a nice sig, I hope to see it done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jfp221 Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 I don't think the microwave would really be a significant lightsource since it is indoors and the light from the light fixture would overpower the microwave. Also they usually have a slightly opaque window. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J272 Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 His left leg is too short, but other than that, looking prettie good :D About the lightsources, Jfp, he never even hinted that the microwave was a lightsource,and theres nothing in the sig to indicate as much.... J272 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jfp221 Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 His left leg is too short, but other than that, looking prettie good :D About the lightsources, Jfp, he never even hinted that the microwave was a lightsource,and theres nothing in the sig to indicate as much.... J272 Woops I red Aldeon's post too fast, he said the shadow from the microwave. I was thinking the shadow the microwave made other objects cast. Ignore my post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Alex85 Posted August 29, 2005 Share Posted August 29, 2005 It really has Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeriath Posted August 30, 2005 Author Share Posted August 30, 2005 Well, I felt it was time for an update: Any more things that seem to be off? I haven't finished the left (our view) wall yet, I'm going to add some more details. Curse you Nomad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EP Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 the mask on the character makes his head look really weird (maybe make it longer), and the outlines on the character's clothes should probably be darker instead of lighter, at least for the sections with a solid object behind otherwise it looks like the light isn't coming from the doorway. Also the right hand wall needs a shadow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altkill Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 I would make the mask cover the whol face, and the legs look a lot better, before it looked like one of them was shorter. Alt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeriath Posted August 30, 2005 Author Share Posted August 30, 2005 I'm not sure about the mask, I'll wait for more comments till I do anything about that. As for draker lines, they'd have to be black, which I was trying to avoid because having the lines the same colours as the shadows sometimes looks a litle off. If by the right way (the one with the microwave on it) I haven't gotten that far yet, concentrating on the left wall. EDIT:: Just seen that there are two posts abou the mask. Gonna change it then put up what I have done so far. Curse you Nomad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeriath Posted August 30, 2005 Author Share Posted August 30, 2005 Sorry about the double post, but here is an update: Curse you Nomad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted August 30, 2005 Share Posted August 30, 2005 shark-o-wave wub. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Alex85 Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 Excellent dude. ;) It really has Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 Excellent dude. ;) 8) well shark-o-waves have feelings to :D btw its all pixel cost me a long time! 5 minutes! :shock: :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Alex85 Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 Excellent dude. ;) 8) well shark-o-waves have feelings to :D btw its all pixel cost me a long time! 5 minutes! :shock: :P OH LAWDY LAWDY NOT FIVE MINUTES?! XD It really has Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeriath Posted August 31, 2005 Author Share Posted August 31, 2005 *shuts the can of Spam* Any CC or am I just gonna stand here looking like an idiot. I want to IMPROVE! *this is the point at which no one replies as I have ruined the spam fun, proof - my last two topics* Curse you Nomad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Alex85 Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 *shuts the can of Spam* Any CC or am I just gonna stand here looking like an idiot. I want to IMPROVE! *this is the point at which no one replies as I have ruined the spam fun, proof - my last two topics* Sorry. The sig is looking pretty good. I don't have any complaints really except the mask looks slightly strange to me.. Not sure why. And maybe add some more detail to the floor? It really has Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aeriath Posted August 31, 2005 Author Share Posted August 31, 2005 Floor is the last thing I have to do. The mask does look a bit strange, I'll try and fix that. Curse you Nomad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J272 Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 If I were to venture to guess why the mask looked wierd, I would say that the chin was too sharp.....Thats pretty much it :? Oh, and the walls are a bit contradictory [ They dont point the same direction :shock: ].... J272 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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