Riktar Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 I made my first pixel sig ever today! Here it is: Please give constructive reviews so i can get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazer Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 Hey that's really good for a first. The cartoony style works really well. Only thing I'd say that really needs improving is the background, it's a little empty. Some small things are the bit where the main guy is holding the dragon long looks a bit weird and also the guy on his left that I presume he's just killed. He looks like he's sleeping, but killing something is meant to leave them totally mangled. :) But yeah that's really quite nice. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 its good for a first but i dont like the guy dancing in the background Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Jeppoz Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 its good for a first but i dont like the guy dancing in the background I think he's running away in despair, probably dieing soon due to poison... Anyway it's pretty good. Not that the color scheme is the best i've seen so far in a wildy sig... As pointed out above the background is very basic and flat. The foreground characters are ok, The anatomy is a bit messed up but i think it kinda goes well with the cartoony look (still you'd realy need to shorten the rune guy arms cause they would probably fit a monkey rather than a human). The dead guy looks off. The poisoned one shows no scratches yet he's almost dead meat...Plus due to the flat background he seems to float in an undefined space above the ground... Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riktar Posted August 31, 2005 Author Share Posted August 31, 2005 its good for a first but i dont like the guy dancing in the background He's running away... Anyway it's pretty good. Not that the color scheme is the best i've seen so far in a wildy sig... As pointed out above the background is very basic and flat. I know the background's not great... I'll try to focus on that next time. The anatomy is a bit messed up but i think it kinda goes well with the cartoony look (still you'd realy need to shorten the rune guy arms cause they would probably fit a monkey rather than a human). I know well about the arms. I was just too lazy to make them again. ^^' (I drew the arms about 3 times before getting them like this) The poisoned one shows no scratches yet he's almost dead meat...Plus due to the flat background he seems to float in an undefined space above the ground... I'll go add some wounds on the characters... kinda forgot about that. As for the poisoned noob, he's not gonna be really wounded since the poison killed him mostly. I don't think that he floats that much... anyways i'll still add a shadow. Sorry again for the backgrounds. The dead guy looks off. What do you mean? A little more precision please. Thanks for the review. It made me see the negative points of my sig. I'm still open for critics! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 Its needs a border, improve the background, too empty, and shade a bit more, the guy appears to be floating. Fix the legs, looks like one leg is infront of the other... :? and the way his holding the long its a bit wierd. The eyes of the poisoned guy id really funny. Nice for the first one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riktar Posted August 31, 2005 Author Share Posted August 31, 2005 Its needs a border, improve the background, too empty, and shade a bit more, the guy appears to be floating. Fix the legs, looks like one leg is infront of the other... :? and the way his holding the long its a bit wierd. The eyes of the poisoned guy id really funny. Nice for the first one. I am currently working on improving the sig. I already changed the sword and the hand, fixed the monkey arms and other stuff. Thanks for the tip, i'll fix the legs, add a little more shading and a border (was not sure wether or not to put one from the start) Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 looks like he's doing ballet to me, anyway background is empty the shading is too blocky on ground and theres too much difference with the lumonisity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riktar Posted August 31, 2005 Author Share Posted August 31, 2005 Okay, i think i fixed most things that were so-so on the first one except the background... i'm getting bored and i don't feel like doing it right now. Anyways, i added some wounds on the poisonned noob, added a sword in the chest of the dead one (he got killed in one shot - I'd like to be able to do that on a noob in RS :lol: ) and a bow in the back of my character. Though it looked cool. I also fixed the "monkey arms" and the legs are ok now, i think. Changed the poison color on the dagger and added the shadows under the characters. That's about all, i think... looks like he's doing ballet to me, anyway background is empty the shading is too blocky on ground and theres too much difference with the lumonisity If you don't understand the drawing, it's a noob facing away from us and is running away rapidly with his hands in the air. Anyways, I still accept critics but i won't change anything for today. I'm bored of pixeling for now. :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danger2 Posted September 1, 2005 Share Posted September 1, 2005 is it just me or the tree on the background is WAAY too big? the guy on the background has cube head :lol: maybe slant his arms abit to the right and not straight up, also move the leg on the right a bit more to the right so it doesnt look like hes dancing XD silly noobs somehow ur character looks weird maybe because it has no neck? dunno, ooh ok nevermind i see what it is, the body part of ur character is facing to the right while the legs are facing the font, also i dont like how the sword and the hand are positioned? it looks like he twisted/broke his arm or something :S the poisoned noob is good loockin i think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riktar Posted September 1, 2005 Author Share Posted September 1, 2005 is it just me or the tree on the background is WAAY too big? Oh...um...um...*points behind you* Hey what's that??!*runs* Seriously, now that you say it, it's almost the same distance as the running noob and it's way too big. Thanks, i'll fix that sometime. the guy on the background has cube head :lol: maybe slant his arms abit to the right and not straight up, also move the leg on the right a bit more to the right so it doesnt look like hes dancing XD silly noobs Cube head...? Yeah, his head looks "squarey" cuz of the arms. I think i should slant em a bit. This noob was quickly made because he's way far in the back and i though people would not really look up the details...Obviously, i was wrong. :lol: I'll fix him up too. somehow ur character looks weird maybe because it has no neck? No, he has a neck but it's covered by the cape attached near his face... It's a bit dark and not really visible, but... oh well. ooh ok nevermind i see what it is, the body part of ur character is facing to the right while the legs are facing the font The legs of a character are not necessarily at the same angle as the body. Remember, that's what knees are for. also i dont like how the sword and the hand are positioned? it looks like he twisted/broke his arm or something :S I think you don't see it well. He holds the sword towards the ground so he got his wrist a little twisted, yes. In case you aren't able to see witch side of the hand is the thumb, is the right side... Well, i'm not really good on explaining, but hope that clarifies things...a bit... yes, let's just hope. :lol: *Cracks fingers* Whew. Thank you for the good reviews!(some are in only a few lines but they're still good.)I'm improving in pixeling i think. Thanks. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frogspoons Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 hey thats really good, the guy in the background should go though. CANE Just to be different. Think about it. A freaking Dragon Cane with a Dragonstone gem.The spec will simply your character equiping a glove and beachslapping the enemy, who will break down and do the Cry emote for 10 seconds straight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DanSwano Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 pixel sigs seems to be popular nowdays :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOND Posted September 3, 2005 Share Posted September 3, 2005 nice.........not bad....but the guy with full rune needs some work......and im with blazer needs somthing more in bg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted September 3, 2005 Share Posted September 3, 2005 well if your gonna get bored easily its not a good sign heres a tip for you listen to music ;) its still good for a first move on to a new sig though taking these cc's in your stride and concider each one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riktar Posted September 4, 2005 Author Share Posted September 4, 2005 well if your gonna get bored easily its not a good sign heres a tip for you listen to music ;) its still good for a first move on to a new sig though taking these cc's in your stride and concider each one Well, i'm usually patient but it's just always making corrections and working on the same sig gets boring... i won't make anymore improvements to this one. I'll make a new one when i get an idea. (I'm working on it, watch for it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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