CC on my Pixel Art

[emofreak123]

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now i need help shrinking the guy and setting up a background i need C/C again

[terley]

crits from top to bottom of sketch

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1) maybe alter the head shape to make it look a bit more like a humans head (not in a bad way :lol: just a little bit too simple atm, and a tad too big), plus maybe improve the neck. this'll help http://www.hippytrippy.net/sijun/head-drawing/

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2) the shoulders need to be a slight bit bigger, the ribs need to be raised and try to make it look a bit more natural (looks too robotic).

 

 

 

http://www.hippytrippy.net/sijun/basic- ... /index.htm again from that site :?..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3)the arms are both odd sizes and neither are correct :lol: , kinda like 'frankenstein's monster'.. the torso is a good size tho, im guessing that your doing what I usually do to build characters which is pretty easy when it comes to doin it on the pc.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

don't judge my one heh, litterally around a 1 minute job.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

4) the hips usually out at the hips a bit, not just on women :wink: but I suppose clothing will fix tha..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

5)you've got odd lengthed legs again though the whole leg proportion is basically right, only thing that messes it up is the fact that the knee's are too far down the legs and his left leg is longer than the right.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Use this as a guide and try make your alterations over it in a different colour, if you are using paint you can draw over this drawing in another colour and rub out the black below by selecting black in your left colour selector and the background colour in the right, then just rub out by holding down the right mouse button. It helps when doing linework too..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'd try resize that character cus you'd be looking at a lot of work and detail there to make it look right, any slight mistakes in the linework can add up to make the character look really odd :? , as I said it looks a bit robomatronic atm :D .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Very nice tho, I suppose it'd be easier drawin it out on paper.. 6/10 so far but im just gonna ignore that you've conked up the limbs..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Ter :P

[emofreak123]

hmm, thanks for the critique, im gonna try to fix some stuff, i was actually thinking of printing it out large and sketching it onto paper and working with it then. I honestly have been having a lot of trouble with the body being turned, the arms were a bit of a pain too, thanks for the links of the head, they help a lot. I will show you guys progress.

[emofreak123]

bump bump, updated the sketch and i need more critiques on the outline. PlxKTHX

[emofreak123]

bump... please i really need C/C

[blazer]

He has underpants on the outside of his armour...? :?

[emofreak123]

no no no, thats a section of the armor... better c/c please?

[Antrune]

He has underpants on the outside of his armour...? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ROFL :lol: :lol:

[emofreak123]

bump?

[terley]

didn't take any advice so I suppose its not that much better :? , please at least fix his legs, his knees need to be half way up his legs not near the ankles..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

that shield looks too small to defend your guy, and he still looks too robomatronic (did I just make up a word :shock: ), if that don't make sense what I ment is you've just straigtened all the lines, theres no curves or anything.. and the structure is very stiff too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Ter