well yeah, i know it is really bad, but REALLY bad

 

 

 

im also bad at armour, basic linwework to, thats the kinda weird thingy with me, im really but at linework etc, but my shading is pretty good for a beginner ^^

 

 

 

well anyways, here it is (its a really early WIP)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh, and..

 

 

 

i couldnt get the legs on it, so i didnt do the legs :)

you obviously a beginer...no offense but i could draw that in two secs

hehehe i love the pants that come above the bellybutton :-D but yeah its not that bad for a beginner, really and you will get better im a beginner still too

Lol I did this quick in about a minute. Basically I just wanted to show you how the body should look. Try to make it closer to a human figure and take a decent amount on your linework. Gl with the rest of your sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope it helps :)

actually that 'things' to his body werent ment to be pants, his stumic should be sumewhere in that area :P

well i used your linework and improved it to fit the human body.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i came up with this

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well on msn i said you could progress on it..

 

 

 

i take it back, progressing on someone elses linework gets you nowhere.

 

 

 

its better for you to use it as reference.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

might i remind you, you have way more TALENT that i had when i was your age.

 

 

 

couldnt draw worth a nickle, however i started to draw dinosaurs and dogs from reference books and gradually became better with the mighty pencil.

 

 

 

however repeat story when i started using the mighty computer to draw its just allot harder in use then a pencil because you are reliant on more factors.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

so.. im going to use that "improvement" as my own for my own practice.. and turn it into a nice free practice sig for the lucky victim.

oh sorry quer he asked me on msn to help im, so I did my own drawin to show how I'd do it.. sorry if I tredded on your help, didnt know u were helpin him.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

someone said it looks like my character has a hunchback, its a hood thingie, from the castle wars :cry: . I wanted to make im look rockerish, just a cool guy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you see the proportions are wrong and he looks broken and twisted in places.. The head looks a bit oval and creepy and his hands are tinie weenie, I dnt know what you were doing with the waist but it'd look weird even if you did it well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hope you can see anythin from mine that'll help ya, atb ~ Ter