Please Post CC so i can Improve on my tech. and drawing.

 

 

 

Pay no attention to the background, its basicly just a rough sketch of wat i want,

 

 

 

the guy is wat i want the CC on,

I think the sheild may be to big and the scimmy to small?

In my opiniono the guy is too short, his legs and torse are very square and wide, but could easily be fixed

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also shiled is too large and scimmy too small

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know my comments my seem hrash, but I think it helps you improve more if I tell thr truth rather than sugar coating it

His legs are out of proportion. His hand is holding that dagger in a weird way. His arms are a little short. He is way too fat. Other than that, itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s fine.

the head is 1\8 of the body

the head is 1\8 of the body

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

he's on steriods :lol:

hes supposed to be fat

 

 

 

the legs are wide becuase he is wearing baggy pants

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i do agree that the shield is to big and the scimmy is to small

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thx for the CC

 

 

 

more is welcome

hes supposed to be fat

 

 

 

the legs are wide becuase he is wearing baggy pants

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i do agree that the shield is to big and the scimmy is to small

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thx for the CC

 

 

 

more is welcome

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Then why did you give him noticeble abs?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Try to look at some human anatomy, that would probably help you alot.

Even if he is supposed to be 'fat', show me a person with 5-head wide shoulders.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You could do in a lesson of anatomy, but first google perspective drawing. Knowledge of perspective is among the most basic of skills in art - and it also happens to be one of the most overlooked. Especially on this board. ^^;

Well then i offer this advice:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If hes supposed to be fat remove abs

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

baggy trousers aren't perfectly sqaured they are narrower at waist

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

His head is way too small as previously said

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and his legs are way too short for his body

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and also take this advice do not ask for C/C and then discount most comments whihc are clearly true and would not be hard to edit