An Abstract Peice

[LowFatMilk]

well here is my peice that i messed around with for a few hours, i used soa's smudge tutorial but also put a bit of my own in it.

Please leave me som CC

Cheers,

Jake

 

[dsavi]

It doesn't seem to have any sort of flow; The shape in the middle just looks random and out of place.

I hope you know what I mean by flow. It could be described as a path for the eye to move on while looking at an image.

These have flow:

Flow is usually in a certain direction. In the first signature (By Soa), the flow is pretty clearly illustrated by the horizontal line. The flow is from left to right.

In the second sig, also by Soa, the flow is from the top left to lower right or vice-versa- Flow can be bidirectional.

In the last sig, by Thruitall, it is kind of difficult to clearly make out the direction of flow but I would say it goes from the middle right to the upper left.

Hope this helps.

[LowFatMilk]

hehe i know about flow :D but i just like to mess around,

even if there is no flow, sometimes i like to bend the rules abit :P

thanks for ur suggestion though :D

[Ouchy]

Riight.:rolleyes:

You can't start a car without an engine, so what's a piece without flow?

[Nadril]

hehe i know about flow :D but i just like to mess around,

even if there is no flow, sometimes i like to bend the rules abit :P

thanks for ur suggestion though :D

 

That's great and all but it's going to be bad unless you follow them in this case.

 

You don't have a good enough grip on the rules to bend them. Plus there is no reason for you to have no flow in this piece, it's not like you're trying to make a statement about something.

[LowFatMilk]

well i thanks you all for ur advice!