January 21, 201016 yr I like this. It seems to be a tad out of focus, while being over sharpened. Get what I mean? I like the composition.
January 21, 201016 yr Author It must be you, because I made sure specifically that I didn't sharpen it too much - what makes it look out of focus? 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
January 21, 201016 yr Just a personal preference, but I would crop the sky out a bit. Seems to take up too much space, the horizon cuts off about 60%.
January 21, 201016 yr Nah I like the sky. Is shiny refering to the waves on the horizon? They don't seem quite as in focus as the foreground.
January 21, 201016 yr Just a personal preference, but I would crop the sky out a bit. Seems to take up too much space, the horizon cuts off about 60%.No, that would kill the aspect ratio.
January 22, 201016 yr Just a personal preference, but I would crop the sky out a bit. Seems to take up too much space, the horizon cuts off about 60%.No, that would kill the aspect ratio.Do you even know what an aspect ratio is?
January 22, 201016 yr Just a personal preference, but I would crop the sky out a bit. Seems to take up too much space, the horizon cuts off about 60%.No, that would kill the aspect ratio.Do you even know what an aspect ratio is?I bet he does, and I agree with him. Little put the sky like that for effect reasons. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van.
January 23, 201016 yr Just a personal preference, but I would crop the sky out a bit. Seems to take up too much space, the horizon cuts off about 60%.No, that would kill the aspect ratio.Do you even know what an aspect ratio is?I bet he does, and I agree with him. Little put the sky like that for effect reasons.The issue is that the horizon line is what your eyes automatically focus to, it helps create the balance between the space and the focal point. What I see on the picture the rock and wave direction should be the focal point. So cropping the large sky out and putting the moving waves to lead towards the bottom, and the waves above the rock lead into the distance. Sets your eyes in an easier place. Those lines I drew are the lines of movement and placing the focal point somewhere more fitting. The rock shouldn't be on the middle, it creates a huge split in the picture. It also distinguishes distance. Placing it higher up makes it look further back, giving more room for the bottom to flow easier. Lines: Recropped:
January 23, 201016 yr That cropped version is too busy, there is movement on all of it. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van.
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