Sam Posted January 21, 2010 Share Posted January 21, 2010 View on deviantART or Artician. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 21, 2010 Share Posted January 21, 2010 I like this. It seems to be a tad out of focus, while being over sharpened. Get what I mean? I like the composition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted January 21, 2010 Author Share Posted January 21, 2010 It must be you, because I made sure specifically that I didn't sharpen it too much - what makes it look out of focus? 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shin Posted January 21, 2010 Share Posted January 21, 2010 Just a personal preference, but I would crop the sky out a bit. Seems to take up too much space, the horizon cuts off about 60%. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeffwilson99 Posted January 21, 2010 Share Posted January 21, 2010 Nah I like the sky. Is shiny refering to the waves on the horizon? They don't seem quite as in focus as the foreground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsavi Posted January 21, 2010 Share Posted January 21, 2010 Just a personal preference, but I would crop the sky out a bit. Seems to take up too much space, the horizon cuts off about 60%.No, that would kill the aspect ratio. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 21, 2010 Share Posted January 21, 2010 I mean kinda like this - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace6470 Posted January 22, 2010 Share Posted January 22, 2010 ^slow shutter speed makes water blurry smooth, not necessary out of focus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 22, 2010 Share Posted January 22, 2010 I know that.... I think it is out of focus as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shin Posted January 22, 2010 Share Posted January 22, 2010 Just a personal preference, but I would crop the sky out a bit. Seems to take up too much space, the horizon cuts off about 60%.No, that would kill the aspect ratio.Do you even know what an aspect ratio is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted January 22, 2010 Share Posted January 22, 2010 Just a personal preference, but I would crop the sky out a bit. Seems to take up too much space, the horizon cuts off about 60%.No, that would kill the aspect ratio.Do you even know what an aspect ratio is?I bet he does, and I agree with him. Little put the sky like that for effect reasons. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shin Posted January 23, 2010 Share Posted January 23, 2010 Just a personal preference, but I would crop the sky out a bit. Seems to take up too much space, the horizon cuts off about 60%.No, that would kill the aspect ratio.Do you even know what an aspect ratio is?I bet he does, and I agree with him. Little put the sky like that for effect reasons.The issue is that the horizon line is what your eyes automatically focus to, it helps create the balance between the space and the focal point. What I see on the picture the rock and wave direction should be the focal point. So cropping the large sky out and putting the moving waves to lead towards the bottom, and the waves above the rock lead into the distance. Sets your eyes in an easier place. Those lines I drew are the lines of movement and placing the focal point somewhere more fitting. The rock shouldn't be on the middle, it creates a huge split in the picture. It also distinguishes distance. Placing it higher up makes it look further back, giving more room for the bottom to flow easier. Lines: Recropped: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 23, 2010 Share Posted January 23, 2010 Yeah... uncropped is more appealing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat_61 Posted January 23, 2010 Share Posted January 23, 2010 That cropped version is too busy, there is movement on all of it. I Support TET!| If you want bunny PM Me.|Click For My DevArt^ Cowboy is the Best ^IT'S A TRAP SHINY JUST WANTS TO STALK YOU.Hell yeah I do. Whats your msn?That's how it all starts. Next he's going to ask you what flavor of candy you enjoy and whats your favorite color van. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted January 24, 2010 Share Posted January 24, 2010 Uncropped has balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chuggy Posted January 24, 2010 Share Posted January 24, 2010 I like the uncropped version better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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