Can u give a rating + advice to make it better. This is my first btw, took about 3 hours.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im hoping the link works

not that bad

mine was worse,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i think the guy that lays on the ground there is nog depth in it adn the guy that stands out is to thin

You need to work on proportions and composition.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Look at pictures of people and try to learn how big some pieces of anatomy are in relation to other bits. Also try to learn how muscles relate to each other, because this affects the things that people wear.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Plate mail in particular is one of the things that a lot of people here make mistakes on. It's not solid. It was never meant to be solid, because you have to be able to put it on. Think of plate armour more as a series of metal pieces that fit over each other to protect muscles and target areas, not as a glorified rigid set of clothing. Plate armour is usually secured by straps and backed with chainmail, so resist the urge to cover every inch of your characters with solid metal. Use chainmail to cover joints and try not to put any plates where you wouldn't reasonably expect to be hit often.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Composition-wise, you could do with better placement of characters. Maybe have the archer slumped over a rock, and the swordsman standing over him, because at the moment, he's running at a corpse. Try not to have background colours that are the same as the colours on characters. Contrast is often better than having "ubar leet equips and wildy".

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On that, try to be different and not use Runescape as a source for equipment designs. JAGeX is bad at that.

SInce it is my first I'm glad for any help I can get, Thanks!

Not bad for first time. The characters are too skinny but that can be fixed. Work more on the BG to make it more 3D than a 2D wallpaper.

not bad but, the guy on grounds looks like a piece of paper , lol

not bad for a first, but there is no depth in it..

THis is my most recent pixel

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

can u please rate and advice please