kharneboy Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 Can u give a rating + advice to make it better. This is my first btw, took about 3 hours. im hoping the link works Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verie__Bad Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 not that bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ronnie_kloet Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 mine was worse, i think the guy that lays on the ground there is nog depth in it adn the guy that stands out is to thin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zonorhc Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 You need to work on proportions and composition. Look at pictures of people and try to learn how big some pieces of anatomy are in relation to other bits. Also try to learn how muscles relate to each other, because this affects the things that people wear. Plate mail in particular is one of the things that a lot of people here make mistakes on. It's not solid. It was never meant to be solid, because you have to be able to put it on. Think of plate armour more as a series of metal pieces that fit over each other to protect muscles and target areas, not as a glorified rigid set of clothing. Plate armour is usually secured by straps and backed with chainmail, so resist the urge to cover every inch of your characters with solid metal. Use chainmail to cover joints and try not to put any plates where you wouldn't reasonably expect to be hit often. Composition-wise, you could do with better placement of characters. Maybe have the archer slumped over a rock, and the swordsman standing over him, because at the moment, he's running at a corpse. Try not to have background colours that are the same as the colours on characters. Contrast is often better than having "ubar leet equips and wildy". On that, try to be different and not use Runescape as a source for equipment designs. JAGeX is bad at that. Varrock Library: Shattered Sky | Silent Thunder | The Emperor's FinestAstri @ MythWeavers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kharneboy Posted November 19, 2005 Author Share Posted November 19, 2005 SInce it is my first I'm glad for any help I can get, Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterxman Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 Not bad for first time. The characters are too skinny but that can be fixed. Work more on the BG to make it more 3D than a 2D wallpaper. Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gotsol Posted November 20, 2005 Share Posted November 20, 2005 not bad but, the guy on grounds looks like a piece of paper , lol RSN: 1 day late | Private chat: On | 60 ATTACK | 81 STRENGTH | 72 HITPOINTS | | 80 MAGIC | 13 PRAYER | 1 DEFENSE | 65 COMBAT | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KnightLite Posted November 20, 2005 Share Posted November 20, 2005 not bad for a first, but there is no depth in it.. - Only character in Runescape History maxed out in RSC and RS2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kharneboy Posted November 22, 2005 Author Share Posted November 22, 2005 THis is my most recent pixel can u please rate and advice please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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