there it is so give me a rating and some constructive critisism

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For sale in media market! will change things to your liking

looking very good so far, i would give it some neck, and make it a lil skinnyer unless you want it rotund in the lower abdomen area... lol. hands need a bit of work, shading could use a little work

 

 

 

10/10 for effort

 

 

 

8/10 overall, so far

 

 

 

7.5/10 on the hands

 

 

 

9/10 on shading

 

 

 

it looks really good for first try, im doin a pixel to, hope u like it as much as i like yours

i edited them quite quickly i hope they look better than before, i got to admit though before the hands were a bit... awkward... i do have a problem making hands though like quite a few people.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the neck was easy to sort out though :) ty for the cc

can u post a pic of the edited one? i would love to see it

Looks quite good so far, it should progress quite well =-)

make the head bigger it doesnt fit with the size of that body other wise it looks good

I've updated image with new things in mind and added ancient staff :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

need more cc please :)

hey, nice work so far, but i'd make the star on the ancient staf alot thinner, no so big and chunky, it would weigh a tonne lol. good wrk

i made it 2 pixels smaller round the edges (except pokey out bits)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and 1 pixel smaller in centre part

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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added hair and started eyes (may require a good few edits)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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edited eyes to liking and made mouth

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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started background, anyone any ideas?

The head is still too small, but gj, looks cool.

i've finished it :)

His head is still to small for his body...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

.... and what's with the blue paper bag?

The background is very plain, and even my pin straight hair doesn't stay that flat on my head, but other then that it's good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

there it is so give me a rating and some constructive critisism

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For sale in media market! will change things to your liking

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

for some reason when i saw this i just didn't like it... something in my brain just didn't like the shape.... the chest and moon are good but...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

make the head bigger.... or shrink the body

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what is that on his face? a line... try and make it a mouth...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

is that a phat or some strange spell on the ground???

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

othere then that a VERY good first pixel try...

its a rune rock duh lol