I was bored, so I decided to write a poem...I'm not very good at writing them, so tell me what you think:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A Little Newbie

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I will tell you of a tale

 

 

 

About a little newbie

 

 

 

Although his strength was very frail

 

 

 

His courage you could plainly see

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It all began in Lumbridge

 

 

 

His adventure started there

 

 

 

At first he lacked the knowledge

 

 

 

And knew not what was prayer

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Soon, though, he was taken

 

 

 

Into a world of joy

 

 

 

Let it not be mistaken

 

 

 

For he was just a boy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He traveled ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹Ãâcross the lands so vast

 

 

 

And anywhere he went

 

 

 

He improved his skills and very fast

 

 

 

His heart was filled content

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

His adventures abruptly stopped

 

 

 

When a level 93 was seen

 

 

 

He wished to trade and so he swapped

 

 

 

A sword for some GP

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Our little newbie friend

 

 

 

Noticed something very strange

 

 

 

He took one look into his hand

 

 

 

And saw what he exchanged

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He had been scammed and very badly

 

 

 

Surely, he hadnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t missed

 

 

 

What he had traded, but, very sadly

 

 

 

He needed to persist

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅIÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll get you one day, mark my words!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Terrible, just...terrible...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lol, jk. THe meter is a bit odd, but it's interesting. =P

the first two verses are a bit strange (2nd and 4th line for both don't rhyme well) Other that that it was great! I liked the way you described "hats of party"

a little long but was good poem.

Pretty nice, how long did it take you? I would've grown too impatient after the first four stanzas, lol.

Haha v.funy.a little on the long side but good anyway