Nunquam Posted December 6, 2005 Share Posted December 6, 2005 I was bored, so I decided to write a poem...I'm not very good at writing them, so tell me what you think: A Little Newbie I will tell you of a tale About a little newbie Although his strength was very frail His courage you could plainly see It all began in Lumbridge His adventure started there At first he lacked the knowledge And knew not what was prayer Soon, though, he was taken Into a world of joy Let it not be mistaken For he was just a boy He traveled ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹Ãâcross the lands so vast And anywhere he went He improved his skills and very fast His heart was filled content His adventures abruptly stopped When a level 93 was seen He wished to trade and so he swapped A sword for some GP Our little newbie friend Noticed something very strange He took one look into his hand And saw what he exchanged He had been scammed and very badly Surely, he hadnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t missed What he had traded, but, very sadly He needed to persist ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅIÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll get you one day, mark my words!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrph3r Posted December 6, 2005 Share Posted December 6, 2005 Terrible, just...terrible... Lol, jk. THe meter is a bit odd, but it's interesting. =P NO MERCH - NO PEST CONTROL - NO SOUL WARSLowest combat (only sub-90) on the TIF high scores list Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncmd Posted December 7, 2005 Share Posted December 7, 2005 the first two verses are a bit strange (2nd and 4th line for both don't rhyme well) Other that that it was great! I liked the way you described "hats of party" Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
helmker Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 a little long but was good poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryderj716 Posted December 22, 2005 Share Posted December 22, 2005 Pretty nice, how long did it take you? I would've grown too impatient after the first four stanzas, lol. 1690 total and unranked strength. Headed for 1800.I like the irony (no wait, paradoxicality) in how there's a spelling error in this sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arioch227 Posted December 23, 2005 Share Posted December 23, 2005 Haha v.funy.a little on the long side but good anyway |My poem!|New RS suggestions|CAD (13+)|Reserved|Grrr, my sig doesn't work as well as it should. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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