apinagez Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 Here is the WIP: **UPDATED** Non-shaded ground and sky added, dragon finished :) Updated again! Added a decent dragon, began adding the hills, ground, sky and the monastery over the mountains (lol). :) I also changed the idea on the sig, I'm gonna write something like: "Why kill dragons...If you can just play (:twisted:) with them?" It's nicer and funnier now IMO:P FINAL UPDATE: How about it now? C/c and rating are more welcome than ever! :D Seriously, can you people post?? I got replyes only from like 4 guys in over 300 views! :( ^The most disturbing signature on Tip.it^Last.fm|HELLY KAYLA!|Oh the mehagurtz!|#Siencemakers"they care less about their spelling mistakes then I." - Lionheart"apinagez... let me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemonfish Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 very nice, your shading is very visible and works like a treat. You need to add more texture to the hair and maybe colour the lines in. The amulet seems a bit dodgy too, colour the string in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 daaam! that is awsome! i can only make crappy pixles :? but daaaam! thats soo cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apinagez Posted December 21, 2005 Author Share Posted December 21, 2005 Thanks for the c/c guys, how you think I should add texture to the hair? Just fixed the ammy, and drawn freehand the dead dragon ( :lol: ), scanning it now to make the linework :) I still need more replyes :P ^The most disturbing signature on Tip.it^Last.fm|HELLY KAYLA!|Oh the mehagurtz!|#Siencemakers"they care less about their spelling mistakes then I." - Lionheart"apinagez... let me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lambretta89 Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 try adding harmonised highlights...loreal because your worth it :D sorry had to be done :lol: :D yea try adding different shades Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apinagez Posted December 21, 2005 Author Share Posted December 21, 2005 Rofl lambretta :lol: I need some serious advice on the hair, shading of the floor and what to put on the sky, as well as C/c on the whole sig :wink: I've finally finished the shading on the dragon and drawn the ground, it's still pretty plain though :| Here it is: People, please, post C/c :) ^The most disturbing signature on Tip.it^Last.fm|HELLY KAYLA!|Oh the mehagurtz!|#Siencemakers"they care less about their spelling mistakes then I." - Lionheart"apinagez... let me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 Hi there Apinagez! 8) Such a long time I don't post! But, when I saw you pixel... I said to my self: "Post, Post, Post!" I could not let this chance pass! :D Well, Constructive Criticism so: :arrow: About the monk: Her torso is very 3D, impressive shading there! I think you should add a bit more shading in her hair, just a little bit more of shading. The ammy is good, but you could make it darker (maybe) just to be easier to see. You might want to make her hair a bit darker.... :arrow: About the Dragon: His body is really nice, but his head... well, I mean, the nose its just too "round"... and his thong could be thicker, and splited in two parts in the end so it would like a reptile (just a idea)! Another thing you could add, is some scars to it, and a little of blood. His tail is cool, the position he died is very nice. :arrow: Scenario: Well, nothing much to say, since you said its in progress... Well, I have to say that your sky looks like the beggining of a Lava River (bay), not saying its bad, but you could use it to make a lava river going down.... Something else you could do, not doing the river, is adding a cool Giant Sun, so it would look like a Japanese Ninja Film, :lol:, and to look like even more, add some seagulls (even not having a sea!), just to make it look Japanese Style. Its this! Hope it help a bit :) Good Luck with your sig! :D ~k0m0d0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 Almost forgot... Tah bem Top de Linha, heim? See Ya, hope to see some Updates soon! :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemonfish Posted December 23, 2005 Share Posted December 23, 2005 try adding harmonised highlights...loreal because your worth it :D sorry had to be done :lol: :D yea try adding different shades ye well done with the lousy joke. Made me laugh - what does this tell us about me? Anyway. The hair probably needs a bit more randomness, see if I can quickly give you an example. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemonfish Posted December 23, 2005 Share Posted December 23, 2005 The hair needs more constrast. It needs to have parts reflecting and parts in shadow. just play around a bit and find out what looks best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemonfish Posted December 23, 2005 Share Posted December 23, 2005 For floor add rocks as in the example I quickly made. add more colours to make it look even better Got to go now. Seeya for today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apinagez Posted December 23, 2005 Author Share Posted December 23, 2005 Thanks a lot Lemonfish, I'll apply your ideas as soon as I'm done with my new dragon :D I'm really unhappy with the current dragon, i've made a new one that isn't dead, just totally owned but with his life spared by her. I'm finishing the shading of this one, and will add it to the sig, after that I shall improve her hair, shade the floor and add a monastery over the hills on the BG. Thanks to you too K0m0d0, you seem to have liked it so much that it made you post again on tipit! :wink: I'll be back :twisted: ^The most disturbing signature on Tip.it^Last.fm|HELLY KAYLA!|Oh the mehagurtz!|#Siencemakers"they care less about their spelling mistakes then I." - Lionheart"apinagez... let me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemonfish Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 Make it so the hair is longer and more free. you need more shading on the skin and the nose looks kinda weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apinagez Posted December 28, 2005 Author Share Posted December 28, 2005 Massive update! ^The most disturbing signature on Tip.it^Last.fm|HELLY KAYLA!|Oh the mehagurtz!|#Siencemakers"they care less about their spelling mistakes then I." - Lionheart"apinagez... let me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D_u_e_s Posted December 28, 2005 Share Posted December 28, 2005 nice work really. Keep it up, lol the dragon is funny. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lambretta89 Posted December 28, 2005 Share Posted December 28, 2005 i wasnt joking about harmonised highlights itll give some depth to the hair :D also itll add character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apinagez Posted December 28, 2005 Author Share Posted December 28, 2005 How about it? :D Edit: Oh, lambretta, I have tried changing the hair, but it got awful, I think it's the best I can make :lol: ^The most disturbing signature on Tip.it^Last.fm|HELLY KAYLA!|Oh the mehagurtz!|#Siencemakers"they care less about their spelling mistakes then I." - Lionheart"apinagez... let me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MD666 Posted December 28, 2005 Share Posted December 28, 2005 I think it would look alot better if you slowed it down. Good job though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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