WutangFlu Posted December 31, 2005 Share Posted December 31, 2005 Crits PLEASE closeup (outdated) its my own shading style.. so dont make fun fo me.. P00 on you :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted December 31, 2005 Author Share Posted December 31, 2005 Random: Joined: 26 Jun 2004 Posts: 666 Location: On The Dark Side Of The Moon fits the occasion and subject matter :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EP Posted December 31, 2005 Share Posted December 31, 2005 wings look pretty good, as long as they are colored right they should be fine but you have to be careful on making the holes look decent, particularly the ones with little flaps left. Not sure about the arms but the left (our right) arm looks a bit misshapen, could be because of pose but it still seems unnatural. The left leg also looks slightly out of place, twisted so that it starts further from the center of the body then it should, in comparison to where the front of the demon is based on the chest/belly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted December 31, 2005 Author Share Posted December 31, 2005 wings look pretty good, as long as they are colored right they should be fine but you have to be careful on making the holes look decent, particularly the ones with little flaps left. Not sure about the arms but the left (our right) arm looks a bit misshapen, could be because of pose but it still seems unnatural. The left leg also looks slightly out of place, twisted so that it starts further from the center of the body then it should, in comparison to where the front of the demon is based on the chest/belly. good spot on the arm, i'll fix that, as for the leg.. = pose :P could use a little adjustment thogh :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted December 31, 2005 Share Posted December 31, 2005 i dont know what you have in mind, ill need to see it later in the workings to give proper C/C but the muscles on the torso look completely messed up, dont know whether theyre just basic structure for you to re do or not though oh, and his (our left) arm.... you turned his shoulder into a muscle... it isnt connected to him :shock: EEK! thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted December 31, 2005 Author Share Posted December 31, 2005 oh, and his (our left) arm.... you turned his shoulder into a muscle... it isnt connected to him :shock: EEK! thats his shoulder... you'll see what i mean when i start shading it :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_shadow Posted December 31, 2005 Share Posted December 31, 2005 well.. hope you dont mind, but i edited the actual linework (in red) it was easier than just explaining... theyre just small modifications i personally reckon would make it look 'better' but of course thats me.. also the chest area kinda looks like it has gills.. i kno the red lines dont seem much different to the black. but for example with the right leg it looked slightly too high :? but once again, that could just be my eyesight going :lol: anyway- i adore the wings :D and im looking forward to seeing further stages of this and the final :) gl with it :wink: Featuring in my sig: TURT, ma pet turdle! Thanks to- Runemetsa and Aijiru for two of the great sigs!Avatar made by me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frostbite992 Posted December 31, 2005 Share Posted December 31, 2005 his back looks wrong :( anyways hands and feet suck 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted December 31, 2005 Share Posted December 31, 2005 oh, and his (our left) arm.... you turned his shoulder into a muscle... it isnt connected to him :shock: EEK! thats his shoulder... you'll see what i mean when i start shading it :P like i said cant really tell yet ...your gonna have him have obliques right? its really irky when supposedly real muscular people have all these super formed muscles and other muscles dont even show up! thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheDark Posted December 31, 2005 Share Posted December 31, 2005 can i try making a head on him for you so you can get an idea or something :) TheDark or Kevinnv on other forums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted January 1, 2006 Author Share Posted January 1, 2006 can i try making a head on him for you so you can get an idea or something :) go ahead... and thanks all for the crits/tips they'll help alot :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted January 2, 2006 Author Share Posted January 2, 2006 bumpo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hmwcawcc Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 Looking great so far :) <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D_u_e_s Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 dam, that's going to be pretty nice man. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EP Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 still need to fix the left (our right) arm, compared to the other arm it is much to short when in reality it is closer to us so should be larger. Also the muscle for the right bicep looks wierd (looks like he has two, one of which doesnt belong) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted January 2, 2006 Author Share Posted January 2, 2006 wing update, darker shading.. update also crits please :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted January 2, 2006 Author Share Posted January 2, 2006 still need to fix the left (our right) arm, compared to the other arm it is much to short when in reality it is closer to us so should be larger. Also the muscle for the right bicep looks wierd (looks like he has two, one of which doesnt belong) his shoulders are bulky.. and the reason their is a size difference is beacuse of perspective. they are not straight accross the arms and shoulders are bent forward, and ect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godslayer Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 1409 colors. You realize how insane that is? Thats not real pixel art, is it? Anyways, heres the problem. His legs are in the completely wrong place. You see, his six pack, is not above his crotch, but rather his thigh, which throughs off the balance of the picture. Also, does this guy have a manhood? :lol: His neck is also in the wrong place- every body had a central line of motion. If your standing stiff, the line is straight, but if your arch backwards like this guy, the line is curved. Anyways, heres what I'm talking about: Your line of motion: The proper line of motion: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 alot of your muscles ar ein the wrong place.... mainly the arms and you didnt draw obliques!!!! and for how musclar he is supposed to be he has puny shoulder/neck muscles thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 muslce is nice gj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted January 2, 2006 Author Share Posted January 2, 2006 alot of your muscles ar ein the wrong place.... mainly the arms and you didnt draw obliques!!!! and for how musclar he is supposed to be he has puny shoulder/neck muscles He has no skin :P Gs: demons is really angry.. his head is jolted back and hes gunna be screaming.. :P as for colors.. :P lol.. how the hell did u get that number there shouldnt be any more than 4-500 not nearly 1500ish ah well.. its my own style :P :| its random dithering.. i dunno maby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godslayer Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 I dont care about his head, his body can even twist into a position like that, because the neck is in the entirly wrong place, as is his crotch. You cant move your body parts into incorrect places. Also, I did color count on graphics gale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EP Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 wings beyond the right(left) arm need lots of work, unless the bone is sticking out at the bottom of the wings the wing's skin/hide should be sharper like there is an object impeding its deformation, which there is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted January 2, 2006 Author Share Posted January 2, 2006 Thinking about scrapping this, and starting a new project with less anatomy.. maby something more comical/cartoony if anyone want to take possesion of this PM me... you can use it for whatever, finish the hands and feet, and face.. as long as you give me cred, for the body :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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