well this is the sig

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im done with the chars - not touching anything on them, although c/c on them for future reference would be great :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it dosnt look like it but a lot of detail has already gone into the lava stream and bg.. but its too plain :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but what i reall need help with.. is the void space on the ground.. should i just leave it? i cant put any wildy dead trees in, because teh angles are wrong and it looks... WEIRD. im also going to make the arrow in teh bow (ready to be fired) glowing green... ill post that update soon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks in advance guys :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Shadow

The ranger looks as if He can't fit into the lens of the camera and is trying to lean over to make up for it. Otehrwise I like it. I always like your signatures and with the amount you're making it seems you're working hard to become the best :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

gl in the future

if the lava was in that stage it would glow a lot brighter, also is it in some trench because it doesnt look like it and if so perspective is wrong. the lava looks too flat....if you've ever actually seen lava its more lumpy....altough that mgiht actually make it look worse.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And on the topic it says theres a glow added well i think the glow should be slightly tinted the color of the lava

I agree with lemonfish, both of the characters need to be downsized a bit, other wise they look like theyre in a plexiglass box :wink: other then that it looks really good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Adroit\\

if the lava was in that stage it would glow a lot brighter, also is it in some trench because it doesnt look like it and if so perspective is wrong. the lava looks too flat....if you've ever actually seen lava its more lumpy....altough that mgiht actually make it look worse.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And on the topic it says theres a glow added well i think the glow should be slightly tinted the color of the lava

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeah because youve seen real lava before :roll: (lol jp)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the ranger looks hunched over.... he wouldnt be able to fire the bow at all...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the rangers head also seems smushed and a tad bit small..and he seems fat... maybe its just the constant of the dhide, or because he has no muscle definition

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the mage guys looks odd... his shoulders seem too far up, and looks as if he has little to no neck... it also seems like you tried not to draw a face, so tried to make it look dark...youd still be able to see some face....*never try not to draw something! it wont make you anybetter!* his robes also have no folds right now, just odd shading

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shadiing- there isnt a constant light source, and i think that the laca would glow rather brightly tiniting everything a slight orangish color..and making the light source from behind them *not behind them but grrr you get what i mean*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You did the same thing with the mages hands as you did his face

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:evil:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

add rocks or sticks or something to the ground

the middle of the bow on the bottom lights up first ( jsut seems strange to me lol )

yer nice work again. i think u should make the glowing arrow a tad slower but thats up 2 u. lol real lava is blak on top, because it has cooled and u can see the actual lava poking through between cracks in the cooled peices. but if u put that in a sig it would look silly lol. they are crouching, but its a bit late to change that now. the shade looks like he is wearing mittens?!?!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol gl with the sig

 

 

 

RM

thanks for the comments guys :) decided ill leave this sig be now, cause otherwise ill make it worse than it already is :shock: ill remember the tips and use them for future pixels(?)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and remoteman, i know the 'gloves' look like mittens :shock: i suck at hands....

ooohhhhh its a shade

 

if the lava was in that stage it would glow a lot brighter, also is it in some trench because it doesnt look like it and if so perspective is wrong. the lava looks too flat....if you've ever actually seen lava its more lumpy....altough that mgiht actually make it look worse.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And on the topic it says theres a glow added well i think the glow should be slightly tinted the color of the lava

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeah because youve seen real lava before :roll: (lol jp)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the ranger looks hunched over.... he wouldnt be able to fire the bow at all...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the rangers head also seems smushed and a tad bit small..and he seems fat... maybe its just the constant of the dhide, or because he has no muscle definition

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the mage guys looks odd... his shoulders seem too far up, and looks as if he has little to no neck... it also seems like you tried not to draw a face, so tried to make it look dark...youd still be able to see some face....*never try not to draw something! it wont make you anybetter!* his robes also have no folds right now, just odd shading

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shadiing- there isnt a constant light source, and i think that the laca would glow rather brightly tiniting everything a slight orangish color..and making the light source from behind them *not behind them but grrr you get what i mean*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You did the same thing with the mages hands as you did his face

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:evil:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

add rocks or sticks or something to the ground

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

actually i have.....used to live in hawaii :wink:

people hve been saying this but the pose of the archer just doesnt look right for sum reason :? i mena i dont know what view or perspective or wutever u want to call it you were going for but most rangers, archers (in my mind) dont hold there bow like that when they draw back (i think thats the term :oops: ) but heres a pic of what i mean

 

 

 

(this is from google sorry if its "ripping" :roll: )

 

 

 

arm up, bent, ranger aiming, bow bents etc. but ya just somthing to reference to

yeah thanks :D i do know how theyre supposed to be held.. but for some weird reason i still did it wrong.. oh well :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i know how bows are held cause i sometimes do archery and my bro owns a good compound bow

people hve been saying this but the pose of the archer just doesnt look right for sum reason :? i mena i dont know what view or perspective or wutever u want to call it you were going for but most rangers, archers (in my mind) dont hold there bow like that when they draw back (i think thats the term :oops: ) but heres a pic of what i mean

 

 

 

(this is from google sorry if its "ripping" :roll: )

 

 

 

arm up, bent, ranger aiming, bow bents etc. but ya just somthing to reference to

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The whole reason I never do rangers in my sigs is becaues I can't get the stance right. It'll be good help for me using that picture aswell.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dark shadow should be renamed to dragon shadow