Just made this signature, it's my first attempt at colouring/shading. I used to let my brother do shading, but I kinda wanted to try it this time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Start over, this time focusing on perspective, anantomy, and neat non black lines.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Repeat several times= skill. :wink:

agreed, i have been spending all morning on anatomy and my figure drawing. pick up a book at the library, get a pad of paper, and draw till you cant draw no more!

agreed, i have been spending all morning on anatomy and my figure drawing. pick up a book at the library, get a pad of paper, and draw till you cant draw no more!

The shading's not very good even for one of your first. Take out the colour neaten the lines, tweak the anatomy and add small details like chewed pencil (Yum!) That'll make it much better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other than that it's really good, just small edits are needed. Oh and add a nose and maybe some eyes.

Lines aren't neat, everything is too wavy?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Background, why aren't the stones shaded?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

One of the bookshelf holders aren't shaded.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The ammy should be hanging just straight down, not curved, unless there's some wind in the room?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Where's the sky outside the windooow?

I actually really like the look of the lines, sorta as if they have been sketched. 8)