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First pixel unfinished, advice needed


eddiePerfect

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I finaly got around to making my first pixel, here it is..

 

 

 

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updated pic..

 

 

 

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I need advice, bad.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

All and any help will be greatly appreciated.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Work on your man's proportions. His head is WAY too small for that body. Also, try cleaning up your line work a bit.

 

 

 

How do you clean up line work? Also what kind of shading would i need if my light source is behind me?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Make the sun more of a circle, not an egg. Yeah, proportions, I suggest drawing him with a pencil and paper first and get everything down, then draw pixel. Make the black line(seperating the water from the sky) a color inbetween the sky and water color. shading, try some shading in the design.

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The dude's head looks small. :shock: How about some shadding?

 

 

 

How should i shade if the light source is behind him?

 

 

 

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