Hey all its been a while since ive posted

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I've been doing this just for some practice. Might make it into a sig dunno yet.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway just need some tips on shading the mask. Like to define the eyebrows and facial features without them being there if u know what i mean.

 

 

 

If not some C/C would help :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Update: Dumped the mask, D Med makes more sense. 100% MSpaint

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Any C/C appreciated

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cheers

first thing i noticed is you do what i always do and make the waist to thin. but for the mask making it the snout come out and adding the teeth will pull it together

Yeah the chest is awesome but the mask is horrible in my oppinion

yeah i rushed the mask and shield to get an idea of how it'll turn out. I'm going to redo them though, might change the mask to a D med.

Update. Got rid of the mask looked a bit tacky :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BiC

The D med looks good, but what you can see of his face looks blank. Maybe add some hair or eyes... Also, his neck muscles look a bit too big. :?

The left bicept, elbow, and forearm needs a little reshaping imo.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The bicept needs more muscle to match the other side better and the transition on the elbow needs to be worked on a bit

The left bicept, elbow, and forearm needs a little reshaping imo.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The bicept needs more muscle to match the other side better and the transition on the elbow needs to be worked on a bit

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i agree we dont want a deformed body builder and great work on abdomen and bicep areas(the left bicep our right.)

shoulder muscles are way out of proportion.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like ur style tho, keep it up.

loved the mask was different...also like the larger than life style *thumbs up*

He is a bit too thin at the waist. People don't seem to realize that the shape is more awooga than awwoo

I actually liked the mask better than the dragon medium. It just looked cooler. :D

i pmed you the edited version of what i think the problem is

awooga? awwoo? Lemonfish are you ok? lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The D med looks good, but what you can see of his face looks blank. Maybe add some hair or eyes...

 

 

 

Yeah i'll be adding a face, maybe have beard hanging out or something too. Remember its still just a work in progress :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The bicept needs more muscle to match the other side better and the transition on the elbow needs to be worked on a bit

 

 

 

Tried to give the illusion that only one arm is flexing (the bent one). But yeah ill fix up his arm anyway.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i pmed you the edited version of what i think the problem is

 

 

 

reply sent. :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cheers guys, i'll keep all your crits in mind while editing. But for now i want to get started on the background, to explain why he's shirtless :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BiC

Looking really good. That guy has a quiet a body, cept one thing I noticed is where is pecs connect to his traps its very odd looking. If you dont get what I mean look at the right side of his neck, it seems a bit too much of an increase in muscle mass imo.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Was bored and did a few things you should change if you want :P very nice job on the shading !