Bic Posted January 26, 2006 Share Posted January 26, 2006 Hey all its been a while since ive posted I've been doing this just for some practice. Might make it into a sig dunno yet. Anyway just need some tips on shading the mask. Like to define the eyebrows and facial features without them being there if u know what i mean. If not some C/C would help :wink: Update: Dumped the mask, D Med makes more sense. 100% MSpaint Any C/C appreciated Cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kinkydave Posted January 26, 2006 Share Posted January 26, 2006 first thing i noticed is you do what i always do and make the waist to thin. but for the mask making it the snout come out and adding the teeth will pull it together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gunz Posted January 26, 2006 Share Posted January 26, 2006 Yeah the chest is awesome but the mask is horrible in my oppinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bic Posted January 26, 2006 Author Share Posted January 26, 2006 yeah i rushed the mask and shield to get an idea of how it'll turn out. I'm going to redo them though, might change the mask to a D med. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bic Posted January 27, 2006 Author Share Posted January 27, 2006 Update. Got rid of the mask looked a bit tacky :roll: BiC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
np_tyler Posted January 27, 2006 Share Posted January 27, 2006 The D med looks good, but what you can see of his face looks blank. Maybe add some hair or eyes... Also, his neck muscles look a bit too big. :? - Np Tyler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick_7 Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 The left bicept, elbow, and forearm needs a little reshaping imo. The bicept needs more muscle to match the other side better and the transition on the elbow needs to be worked on a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coyote_sprit Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 The left bicept, elbow, and forearm needs a little reshaping imo. The bicept needs more muscle to match the other side better and the transition on the elbow needs to be worked on a bit i agree we dont want a deformed body builder and great work on abdomen and bicep areas(the left bicep our right.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D_u_e_s Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 shoulder muscles are way out of proportion. I like ur style tho, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lambretta89 Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 loved the mask was different...also like the larger than life style *thumbs up* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemonfish Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 He is a bit too thin at the waist. People don't seem to realize that the shape is more awooga than awwoo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knives669 Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 I actually liked the mask better than the dragon medium. It just looked cooler. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted January 29, 2006 Share Posted January 29, 2006 i pmed you the edited version of what i think the problem is thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bic Posted January 30, 2006 Author Share Posted January 30, 2006 awooga? awwoo? Lemonfish are you ok? lol The D med looks good, but what you can see of his face looks blank. Maybe add some hair or eyes... Yeah i'll be adding a face, maybe have beard hanging out or something too. Remember its still just a work in progress :wink: The bicept needs more muscle to match the other side better and the transition on the elbow needs to be worked on a bit Tried to give the illusion that only one arm is flexing (the bent one). But yeah ill fix up his arm anyway. i pmed you the edited version of what i think the problem is reply sent. :wink: Cheers guys, i'll keep all your crits in mind while editing. But for now i want to get started on the background, to explain why he's shirtless :shock: BiC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted January 30, 2006 Share Posted January 30, 2006 Looking really good. That guy has a quiet a body, cept one thing I noticed is where is pecs connect to his traps its very odd looking. If you dont get what I mean look at the right side of his neck, it seems a bit too much of an increase in muscle mass imo. Check out my Slayer Blog!Mod Elder - 117 Combat.Moogs, Rs Legend - You'll be missed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lowgravity Posted January 30, 2006 Share Posted January 30, 2006 Was bored and did a few things you should change if you want :P very nice job on the shading ! Lowgravity, I want to be just like you. But...I never will be as 1337 as you. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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