abyssalreaper Posted January 30, 2006 Share Posted January 30, 2006 For those of you that read the first part were probably wondering when I would make part 2. Well its here! This is just a prologue chapter to explain the events that have passed since part 1. Chapter 1: The Desert ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅKeep moving prisoner!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Proud Acolyte of the Ooc Cmon Steve you can do it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abyssalreaper Posted January 31, 2006 Author Share Posted January 31, 2006 Didn't expect so many posts and views by now! [/sarcasm] Proud Acolyte of the Ooc Cmon Steve you can do it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blacknite310 Posted February 1, 2006 Share Posted February 1, 2006 cant' wait to read the upcmoing chapter of this story, because the last one was very good and well written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncmd Posted February 1, 2006 Share Posted February 1, 2006 yeah you're a pretty good writer though I wish you would take the time to write out numerals because it breaks up the story's flow. Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted February 3, 2006 Share Posted February 3, 2006 Thats only if it is a long paragraph, if it is short like the preceding one then its fair enough. Good catch up prologue, its better than trying to lead a story on from one to another. Better to just say ok this is what happened but thats done and we are moving right along. Like the title it is one of those I know whats gonna happen but if I say it will be wrong type titles. Carry on... http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abyssalreaper Posted February 4, 2006 Author Share Posted February 4, 2006 Sorry if I don't make chapters in a while I've been getting alot of homework lately, ALOT! Anyway heres chapter 2. Chapter 2: The Duel Arena When I came to I was in an arena. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWelcome newcomer to the great Duel Arena! I found you in the desert barely alive. I decided to save you now you must prove that you were worth saving! Prepare yourself to battle my gladiators!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Proud Acolyte of the Ooc Cmon Steve you can do it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted February 5, 2006 Share Posted February 5, 2006 Interesting idea. I like the idea of cloke and dagger, from the dual master. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirith_knight Posted February 8, 2006 Share Posted February 8, 2006 Hmm, interesting. I didn't like one part though Suddenly men came into the room. All of them were wearing rune chest plates and holding dragon spears. The charged toward me and roared a fierce battle cry. I realized I had no weapons and tried to fight with my fists. I was able to knock them all out but more and more came It just seems a bit farfetched that a number of fully armored soldiers could be taken down from weakened, beaten man from the desert. I mean after he turned into the demon thing, okay, but before hand . . . well, this guy must be tough. It did remind me a bit of my old Legend of the Dragon Sword though. Guys got like aspects of the dragon and tore through anything like this guy is with his demon form thingy. keep adding to it though, and I will keep reading it. Maybe have like flashes of memories of what happened to him in that place come back as he fights, i dunno. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abyssalreaper Posted February 9, 2006 Author Share Posted February 9, 2006 Chapter 3: The First Task After I fought in the arena the duel master walked up to me. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬Å I predict you will make a fine warrior, especially after a performance such as that. My name is Krucio what is yours young gladiator?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Proud Acolyte of the Ooc Cmon Steve you can do it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blacknite310 Posted February 13, 2006 Share Posted February 13, 2006 chapter 3 was really good. I'm looking foward to seeing the next chapters and the other challenges that he faces. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 Ego dualality Early dawn Ergo discovery Extreme dominace Errrrr Dont-know Extremely docile Erratic Discoverys ErrrrGiveMeTheFiveKayBecauseIKnowYouWantTo DuringTheNextDay Exctinction (of) Dinosours Evoltional data-construction Everything dont-make-sense Early Data Mix and Match? http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
godsfearme Posted March 12, 2006 Share Posted March 12, 2006 early days great story I will shoot down any one with my bitting wit, and sarcasm!What POSSIBLE reason would someone have to make a fake like that?Does he profit from faking a picture like that? Does it help him at all?Jesus Christ, stop being so suspicious. This is Tip.it for God's sake, not RuneHQ. -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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