For those of you that read the first part were probably wondering when I would make part 2. Well its here! This is just a prologue chapter to explain the events that have passed since part 1.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter 1: The Desert

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅKeep moving prisoner!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Didn't expect so many posts and views by now! [/sarcasm]

cant' wait to read the upcmoing chapter of this story, because the last one was very good and well written.

yeah you're a pretty good writer though I wish you would take the time to write out numerals because it breaks up the story's flow.

Thats only if it is a long paragraph, if it is short like the preceding one then its fair enough.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good catch up prologue, its better than trying to lead a story on from one to another. Better to just say ok this is what happened but thats done and we are moving right along.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Like the title it is one of those I know whats gonna happen but if I say it will be wrong type titles.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Carry on...

Sorry if I don't make chapters in a while I've been getting alot of homework lately, ALOT! Anyway heres chapter 2.

 

 

 

Chapter 2: The Duel Arena

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When I came to I was in an arena. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWelcome newcomer to the great Duel Arena! I found you in the desert barely alive. I decided to save you now you must prove that you were worth saving! Prepare yourself to battle my gladiators!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Interesting idea. I like the idea of cloke and dagger, from the dual master.

Hmm, interesting. I didn't like one part though

 

 

 

Suddenly men came into the room. All of them were wearing rune chest plates and holding dragon spears. The charged toward me and roared a fierce battle cry. I realized I had no weapons and tried to fight with my fists. I was able to knock them all out but more and more came

 

 

 

It just seems a bit farfetched that a number of fully armored soldiers could be taken down from weakened, beaten man from the desert. I mean after he turned into the demon thing, okay, but before hand . . . well, this guy must be tough. It did remind me a bit of my old Legend of the Dragon Sword though. Guys got like aspects of the dragon and tore through anything like this guy is with his demon form thingy. keep adding to it though, and I will keep reading it. Maybe have like flashes of memories of what happened to him in that place come back as he fights, i dunno.

Chapter 3: The First Task

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

After I fought in the arena the duel master walked up to me. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬Å I predict you will make a fine warrior, especially after a performance such as that. My name is Krucio what is yours young gladiator?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

chapter 3 was really good. I'm looking foward to seeing the next chapters and the other challenges that he faces.

Ego dualality

 

 

 

Early dawn

 

 

 

Ergo discovery

 

 

 

Extreme dominace

 

 

 

Errrrr Dont-know

 

 

 

Extremely docile

 

 

 

Erratic Discoverys

 

 

 

ErrrrGiveMeTheFiveKayBecauseIKnowYouWantTo DuringTheNextDay

 

 

 

Exctinction (of) Dinosours

 

 

 

Evoltional data-construction

 

 

 

Everything dont-make-sense

 

 

 

Early Data

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Mix and Match?

early days

 

 

 

great story