divinedrag0n Posted February 13, 2006 Share Posted February 13, 2006 well im not done and i no the warrior kinda stinks but plz rate /10.. and how much it could be worth wen its done... to be added: like 3 more dead ppl and a backround(duh) if u want to buy it pm me ill send it to u afta i finish :wink: [/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted February 13, 2006 Share Posted February 13, 2006 the archer looks like hes floating......bow is waay to long...dont use gradients for shading..... ranger has waaay to thick out line...arrows shoudlnt be flying below the ground....other than that its alright Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goalybobjr Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 the rune doesnt look like the right cyan color and the arrows look way to short. other than that look at what redawn said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdprs Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 What everyone else sadi but also, lines to messy. And uhhh.. The blond dudes face is messed up. Needs more detail aswell http://jdpr.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
divinedrag0n Posted February 14, 2006 Author Share Posted February 14, 2006 yeah the ranger jumped or sumthing i dono prob gonna make a cliff :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soulman01 Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 The pose of the archer doesn't look right! Try raising his right leg(to you it's the left) so his knee is bent! That way it looks like he jump in to the air off one foot and gives him a natural pose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 nice job copy and pasting a bunch of mis-shot arrows. Dont be so lazy next time and draw each individual one. The archer is flying and the guy's arm is slightly raised meaning he's still alive. You made the cape a gradient, even though it might be shaded its not right. it needs more natural shades and flows. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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