Well do u think its good :?:

sorry but no..its very confusing....

sorry but no..its very confusing....

 

 

 

Yeah.. Im a little confused too:S

 

 

 

Fire starts white and gets reder as you go out....

 

 

 

Try spending more then a few minutes on it, and shading is good

i agree with jdprs...im wokring on a sig ive been doing so for days and I still have thinks I need to hammer out :?

bit stange... I don't get whats going on.. theres bones nad stuff in the fire?

character lacks shading...

everything lacks shading

Confusing... mountains, porsons, sky... ahhhh!

 

Confused :?

 

 

 

~komodo

dito :?

kudos to ur first try, they only get better

Start fixing by the small things: add a border, fix the name, shade, things like this...

 

 

 

~komodo