April 1, 200620 yr ive been working on this for a few weeks, every now and then, its weekend now so i started to finish it, and now it did, so here it is! (any improvements are welcome, C/C, flames, whatever) 16 Frames, 21 Kb, Gif format, 300ÃÆÃââââ¬â⬠[http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
April 1, 200620 yr Majorly needs dithering. The star on the left jumps up and down... Stars need some AA. If I were you I would experiment with different outlines other than just black.
April 1, 200620 yr Author i love cartoony style :wink: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
April 1, 200620 yr The guy look flat, there's room for improvement. Thanks Metroid for the siggy and dark_shadow for avvy! \:D/ :thumbsup: <3 wendy
April 1, 200620 yr Author So? :?So i dont need your advice :roll: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
April 1, 200620 yr Urm I think since you open a thread to ask for C/C and rating, you should probably try to accept MD666's comments as he meant no harm or offence either. ;) No offence. Thanks Metroid for the siggy and dark_shadow for avvy! \:D/ :thumbsup: <3 wendy
April 1, 200620 yr Urm I think since you open a thread to ask for C/C and rating, you should probably try to accept MD666's comments as he meant no harm or offence either. ;) No offence. Yup... Improve your char... its flat! Fix the star that jumps, shade the mountain... only :D ~komodo
April 1, 200620 yr Author Urm I think since you open a thread to ask for C/C and rating, you should probably try to accept MD666's comments as he meant no harm or offence either. ;) No offence. Yup... Sorry yall, i was a bit pissed, just lost a match... but thats over now :lol: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
April 1, 200620 yr bad stuff... looks ok to me. the star is bouncing, the person is a little flat, it took me a few tries to regognize the tent thing. i cant read the text as it moves, other than that its good.. good stuff... i can see how the black lines in the shadeed hillside add to the cartooney effect. i like the whole idea of stars. the font is pretty good even though i cant read it. i like how it comes in then goes down fixes... try making more stars twinkle. maybe make some grey out then come back if possible? i dunno experiment with that. try to make it so i dont have to try 3 times to see the name. its ok though. i really like the idea, good work. keep it up!
April 2, 200620 yr Probably try to make that dude sit a little, so he won't look that flat. Like his back is against the tree or something. I guess it will look better. Thanks Metroid for the siggy and dark_shadow for avvy! \:D/ :thumbsup: <3 wendy
April 2, 200620 yr I'm a pro media rater. I come here, and look at your pixel drawing. First impressions, it sucks. Second impressions. It's ok. Third impressions. It sucks. I will now state my reasons for this pixel to suck, and the places it needs to be fixed. 8) 1st of all. That person is so horrible i can't believe you did it. It is so flat and also, it's almost as if it were made in 3 seconds. And the arms a too thin. Also, it looks as if its a cardboard cutout, that just got stuck on to the tree. 2nd. The shading on the hillside is really bad. I hate how the black lines change the colours. Looks also, like a 3 second job, just traced some lines and filled it in with different colours. 3rd. You absolutely need to change that font. It looks like rectangles coming in and dropping down from nowhere. Try are darker, and smoother looking font, not just a couple of rectangles poping out at you. 4th. The stars are just dots in the sky. Try anti-aliasing them, and making them look smooooth. 5th and last problem, is the shading around the moon. It looks a bit like the hillside but no black lines, no dithering. DITHER DITHER DITHER!! OI OI OI!! How to fix the 1st problem: draw him completely again. But this time, make him bigger. And make his joints rounder, not just a stick figure carboard cutout. Then do the shading and dithering. How to fix the 2nd problem: Take out the black lines and do some big time dithering. Always dither :roll: How to fix problem number 3: Just go to http://www.dafont.com for the best fonts ever, get a rounder and smoother font, and make the colour darker, like a green or pale grey. How to fix the 4th problem: Just use some anti-aliasing, and also, add in some little tiny dots around the stars. Make one or two look like planets, as well. Gives the... Night sky kind of look. 5th Problem: Just follow what i said before, DITHER TILL YOUR HEART'S CONENT!!! Hope this helps when you make further, and the current pixel signatures. I love rating them :roll: Add me ingame: Lnterest. I am back.
April 2, 200620 yr Author Dude he's gunna freaking kill you, coz he cant take cc :lol:read above, MD... i tried to apologize to you and the others i wasnt nice to... [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
April 3, 200620 yr sorry if i offended you by saying your pixel sucks Add me ingame: Lnterest. I am back.
April 3, 200620 yr Author sorry if i offended you by saying your pixel sucksok ty :lol: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008]
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