dhkiller Posted April 2, 2006 Share Posted April 2, 2006 Needs some more shading and stuff.. Tips are welcome.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted April 2, 2006 Share Posted April 2, 2006 well find a better skin tone...pink doesnt work for me..frankly..it aint sexy..if you look the obby sheild is waaay to small..and color in the patches around the whip..its white :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dhkiller Posted April 2, 2006 Author Share Posted April 2, 2006 well find a better skin tone...pink doesnt work for me..frankly..it aint sexy..if you look the obby sheild is waaay to small..and color in the patches around the whip..its white :shock: true, true.. I had a hard time on finding a skin color.. and yes the obby shield IS small.. Gonna change it all.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uula Posted April 2, 2006 Share Posted April 2, 2006 The face and the left leg on the dragon armour guy are pretty weird, and the obby shield is a bit small On the second guy, the dagger and shield are kinda small, and his left hand is weird, also the arms shouldnt be bent that way. The glory looks pretty weird, change it. The trees look pretty good, but the stars in the background are way too big. Also, is the 1/4 circle in the left corner a sun, or a moon? It looks like a sun, usually moons are drawn in their full form, not just at the edge. And the color is too sunny. But pretty nice for a first one, although there's a lot to improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dhkiller Posted April 2, 2006 Author Share Posted April 2, 2006 The face and the left leg on the dragon armour guy are pretty weird, and the obby shield is a bit small On the second guy, the dagger and shield are kinda small, and his left hand is weird, also the arms shouldnt be bent that way The trees look pretty good, but the stars in the background are way too big. Also, is the 1/4 circle in the left corner a sun, or a moon? It looks like a sun, usually moons are drawn in their full form, not just at the edge. And the color is too sunny. But pretty nice for a first one, although there's a lot to improve. Yeah I also had something like: geez that looks like a sun.. and yes that dagger is small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uula Posted April 2, 2006 Share Posted April 2, 2006 Here's a pretty neutral skin colour, you can change the brightness to suit your characters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted April 2, 2006 Share Posted April 2, 2006 woah!!!!!!!1 the dagger on the other dude is tiny.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted April 2, 2006 Share Posted April 2, 2006 well as said before about the skin and the sun.. o and the shield should be other way around.. tho it has potential. my advise would be to start out smaller. like 100x100.. then slowly move onto bigger things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted April 2, 2006 Share Posted April 2, 2006 well find a better skin tone...pink doesnt work for me..frankly..it aint sexy..if you look the obby sheild is waaay to small..and color in the patches around the whip..its white :shock: ^ :shock: Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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