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well its pretty good but clean up your lines, and fix t3h newbs armor its so...lumpy? i love the stars though

i did my first ever pixel like 20mins ago its my siggy now.

 

 

 

urs looks great!

it looks good for the first attempt...you should do more of these instead of making those buddie garbage

 

 

 

 

 

you got lazy on the line work on the armor, wrong position for the helmet.

 

 

 

look up the anatomy on the arm

what do you mean by clean up my lines and what do you mean by look up the anatomy?

Cleaning up your lines is:

 

Instead of having a bold black line outlining your character/object, you have a shade of colour slightly lower than the inside.

 

 

 

Example:

 

 

Notice how it is not black all around the house but instead it has been toned to blend in with it.

..thats not what i tohuhgt cleaning up lines was....... :oops:

..thats not what i tohuhgt cleaning up lines was....... :oops:

 

 

 

Lmao, thats what I see it as :oops:.

 

Its either that or just making sure all the lines are straight and not jagged and stuffs.

yeah thats what i think it is...whew at least i wasent all wrong

what do you mean by clean up my lines and what do you mean by look up the anatomy?

 

Remove those thick balck lines and work human body anatomy. Simple

 

 

 

~komodo

The archer helm seems slightly big, the hands of the archer is fat, the noob's armour look as if he's wearing some sort of bra.

 

 

 

And yes, nice try. Not so bad. ;P

Thanks guys, I will work on getting rid of the lines

 

 

 

Edit:

Let me know what you think now!

 

Let me know what you think now!

 

 

 

 

Hmm... I think the hat was better before. Its quite a tricky hat to get right from what I see. :)

 

Also, sort out the name. Its shrouded behind/infront one horn. Put it the other side where there is more room.

 

Otherwise, its very good. ;)

I fixed up the helmet a bit and I also moved the name to a better looking spot!

 

I fixed up the helmet a bit and I also moved the name to a better looking spot!

 

 

 

 

Very nice. Still one more thing though: Scimmy Handle. Just blend that in and it will be smokin' 8)

Nice update, but the archer still got a fat arm. :lol: