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it looks good for the first attempt...you should do more of these instead of making those buddie garbage

 

 

 

 

 

you got lazy on the line work on the armor, wrong position for the helmet.

 

 

 

look up the anatomy on the arm

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Cleaning up your lines is:

 

Instead of having a bold black line outlining your character/object, you have a shade of colour slightly lower than the inside.

 

 

 

Example:

 

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Notice how it is not black all around the house but instead it has been toned to blend in with it.

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The archer helm seems slightly big, the hands of the archer is fat, the noob's armour look as if he's wearing some sort of bra.

 

 

 

And yes, nice try. Not so bad. ;P

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Thanks Metroid for the siggy and dark_shadow for avvy! \:D/ :thumbsup:

<3 wendy

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Let me know what you think now!

 

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Hmm... I think the hat was better before. Its quite a tricky hat to get right from what I see. :)

 

Also, sort out the name. Its shrouded behind/infront one horn. Put it the other side where there is more room.

 

Otherwise, its very good. ;)

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