plz gives comment..doesn't matter if they are harsh and bad comments cus i know this is really bad...but this is my first one so try to be nice :D

 

 

 

i like it but it seems kind of ..... i can think of the word the box thing with your name could be a little bit smoother to blend in and maybe fade into the background at the edges but not a long fade and the back ground needs more details and coll than the plain blue and stripes but maybe light the edges of the black whatever it is a little bit but only the edges and the eliptical shape to the top left needs to be taken out

lol out of all the things u said the only thing i know how to do is take out the circle and the box thing....so plz help and explain plz

i like the animation, but i dont know why its green. The brush work is kinda confusing, dotn know what it is. Not very smooth really either. But its your first one, so its not as bad.

I think it's pretty :lol:

lol i don't know what the black thing is either....just thought i make some random sharp looking objects...sorta like the orange county chopper's logo(that style) and the back is just some bursting light and some sparks are flying off it i guess the little lines on the side....and i guess green is weird maybe i should use the same color as bg

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

can i make something look sharp by just using the brush..like without using the eraser or other tools...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit-ouch this sucks forgot to save it as pdf so now i lost all the layers and i cant edit it lol

gif and brush work don't go well together.

 

 

 

Get rid of the animation to achieve a decent brush visualization

 

 

 

or get rid of brush style to get a nice animated sig.

 

 

 

The way it is now it's pretty bad cause it's almost impossible to define it brushing since the true color is somewhere else.

 

 

 

I'd like to see a non animated, jpg version. :)

ok here u go but i don't have my name on it cus as i have stated on the last thread that i forgot to save it as pdf so i lost all the layer and everything....i only save it in gif...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

so here it is

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ok here u go but i don't have my name on it cus as i have stated on the last thread that i forgot to save it as pdf so i lost all the layer and everything....i only save it in gif...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

so here it is

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Mmm ok...so...what to say...i think you should give it some more pop up look...maybe with a different color scheme with contrasting colors.

 

 

 

About the brushing i think you should try to smooth the design to the limit, cause that's the real beauty of brushworks. Avoid things like the shape on the left for example, still nice start. Keep it up :D

not sure what u meant by smooth the design to the limit...can u post an example plz