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new pik i did on paint


ollieasaurus

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He has no neck, and his arms are very skinny.
Blazer I dont know how long your neck is, but you cant see a neck when hes holding his head to the ground, espacially with long hair :?

 

 

 

I like it, looks good, the only thing missing is shading. to me.

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tough i would give some C/C

 

and rate it on what u have now

 

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- only 1 color shading ? :(

 

- legs are to short

 

- arms shoul be thicker, and even get ticker going to the shoulder. also try and show where the elbow is so its not a strait line. same with knees

 

 

 

- put the head higher so it looks like theer is place for a neck underneed that hair

 

 

 

-don't realy know what background is so i'm not going to camment the purple thing

 

 

 

- like the whole in the ground but could use mor texture an shading ....

 

 

 

 

 

hope this was helpfull

 

 

 

never give up

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He has no neck, and his arms are very skinny.
Blazer I dont know how long your neck is, but you cant see a neck when hes holding his head to the ground, espacially with long hair :?

 

 

 

I like it, looks good, the only thing missing is shading. to me.

Who said he's holding his head to the ground? Ollie certainly didn't so that's just your interpretation. Just the way the hair is and the height of the hair is, compared to the shoulder armour, it just looks weird like he has no neck.
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