hope you like, rate cc

 

 

 

 

 

 

so tips on how to improve would be greatly appreciated, thankyou.

dont seem to be getting many replys just alot of view, please rate i want ideas also to make it better :roll:

The feet look kinda weird and you could use some better shading but it looks good so far

He has no neck, and his arms are very skinny.

He does, but has long hair.

 

 

 

His arms are skinny yes. And he lacks feet. :D

Fix the arms and the foot, it will be better :D

 

 

 

~komodo

He has no neck, and his arms are very skinny.

Blazer I dont know how long your neck is, but you cant see a neck when hes holding his head to the ground, espacially with long hair :?

 

 

 

I like it, looks good, the only thing missing is shading. to me.

ow sorry, goldwolf allready said that, nvm, never been here *poof* :wink:

tough i would give some C/C

 

and rate it on what u have now

 

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- only 1 color shading ? :(

 

- legs are to short

 

- arms shoul be thicker, and even get ticker going to the shoulder. also try and show where the elbow is so its not a strait line. same with knees

 

 

 

- put the head higher so it looks like theer is place for a neck underneed that hair

 

 

 

-don't realy know what background is so i'm not going to camment the purple thing

 

 

 

- like the whole in the ground but could use mor texture an shading ....

 

 

 

 

 

hope this was helpfull

 

 

 

never give up

Change the colour of your font... i didnt realise it actually had text.. i juts noticed out teh corner of my eye

feet look like infinity boots :)

 

 

 

fix feet, arms and shading, and it will be good

 

 

 

just gettin ready for a spell, it looks good

 

 

 

6/10 SO FAR

He has no neck, and his arms are very skinny.

Blazer I dont know how long your neck is, but you cant see a neck when hes holding his head to the ground, espacially with long hair :?

 

 

 

I like it, looks good, the only thing missing is shading. to me.

Who said he's holding his head to the ground? Ollie certainly didn't so that's just your interpretation. Just the way the hair is and the height of the hair is, compared to the shoulder armour, it just looks weird like he has no neck.