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Very Very First Runescape Picture (Re-Edited, 15/05)


Platty5791

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Well, After looking at some of these ive been amazed at the artists we have here, i here got intreiged and had to try myself...

 

 

 

BTW THIS IS MY FIRST TIME IVE EVER DREW ON A PC

 

 

 

I done this on Paint...Pixel By Pixel lol, i have to say im pritty proud of some of the stuff on it, it took me a few hours obviously...and here it is, im adding more soon but this is what i have so far, and would like a rating please

 

 

 

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Obviously im adding a background (wildy) and a person im attacking later on.

 

 

 

EDIT

 

After following some of you're comments i changed to this:

 

 

 

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Also ill be adding background etc later

 

 

 

EDIT #2

 

 

 

This was a quick edit, havent put much detail in yet...but yea just to show you what its gonna look like

 

 

 

making27tr.png

 

 

 

EDIT #3

 

 

 

making1pa.png

 

 

 

EDIT #4

 

 

 

making4ul.png

 

 

 

Pritty happy iwth this, still need more detail i think

 

maybe a guy in the ice, but how :S

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I think it is good for a first try, Try a backround?

 

 

 

Good Job but you need to clean up you lines.

 

 

 

Try experimenting with some curved lines, straight lines are boring.

 

 

 

Nice shading for a first! Experiment with some smooter transitions, like using dithering.

 

 

 

The Head is odd. Make some eyes, not lines.

 

 

 

The left arm is too thin compared to the right one.

 

 

 

The feet are a little blocky.

 

 

 

Party hat points need to be evened out, it's too crooked.

 

 

 

You make the ear show through his hair, unless his hair is skin tight it wouldn't happen.

 

 

 

Good Luck with others.

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Stoop, to what you said, nice tips

 

 

 

but i cant exactly do that kind of stuff on paint now can i :)

 

 

 

When i tried to add eyesthey either look terrible or like the eyes are popping out

 

 

 

 

 

yea thanks for the shading comment, spent my time on that

 

 

 

and yes i agree, the arm is to thin

 

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Nice start, your first is always the one you're most proud of.

 

 

 

 

 

hehe exactly...but sometimes your first is also your worst :?

 

 

 

 

 

anyway its pretty good....nice anatomy(you should see some other begining anatomys :shock: ) and decent shading. Work on blending the shading more though thats what makes a good pixel.

 

 

 

Also work on making his body "flow" a bit more. Right now its very rigid.

 

 

 

 

 

hehe there you go :wink:

 

 

 

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erm? explain again in english plz =]

 

 

 

how do i blend all the shades etc..im using paint.

 

 

 

im now gonna install macromedia Fireworks tho

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