darkashuran Posted May 28, 2006 Share Posted May 28, 2006 i only have the outdated ms paint that came with my 2000 dell and i know it sucks compared to alot of ppl who do this but its my first try please tell me how bad it sucks :oops: Haley610 and Ashuran22 Together IRL and RS ,I Love You Forever ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coffe73 Posted May 28, 2006 Share Posted May 28, 2006 Anatomy a bit off... feet are wierd. other than that its good... well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imhomer Posted May 28, 2006 Share Posted May 28, 2006 It looks like you started with a drawing which is really good, a step above what I can do. The whole reason I'm mentioning this is because it looks like the face, hair, and hands haven't been changed from a drawing so the whole things looks kinda messy. Choose either a sketch or a pixel but not both in the same sig. Anyways I like the shading but the studs look kinda like polka dots :oops: . The studs also take away from some of the detail on the upper body. You should try shading the magic bow a bit more to make it look less 2d, unless that's what you're going for of course. Also it looks like it was saved as a JPG of GIF at some point because the quality is kinda messed up. Make sure you always start with a PNG and go with it all the way through. Last comment is the text looks kinda boring. Try going into MS Word and getting a cool font. Then go into paint and outline the words in a darker color. This gives it a cool border and makes it stand out. And speaking of a border, you need one. Nothing too fancy, just 2 or 3 pixels around the image. I think dark red would go well with this sig. So overall: 7/10 Work on shading a bit more Stay all pixel or all drawing Make a border More interesting font Always save as a PNG to preserve quality! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkashuran Posted May 28, 2006 Author Share Posted May 28, 2006 ah thanks alot! i need all the help i can get :lol: Haley610 and Ashuran22 Together IRL and RS ,I Love You Forever ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knives669 Posted May 28, 2006 Share Posted May 28, 2006 Wow. Very good for your first try! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted May 28, 2006 Share Posted May 28, 2006 to me theres nothing wrong with the atonomy :? you could save as png as said above, but I prefer .bmp most, as the format says: Bitmap. very good, try a background :wink: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted May 28, 2006 Share Posted May 28, 2006 Except the hips being slightly too thin. Good job though, don't like the face being black & white though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted May 28, 2006 Share Posted May 28, 2006 I love the two tone of the armor sorta like the plaing B@W that i was doing good work there... Face needs to be colored over in a skin tone and the hair needs to be redone... Also pardon me for asking is it a girl or a boy... really with the small waist and a thin face it could be either good work tho New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enk Posted May 29, 2006 Share Posted May 29, 2006 .. He took a drawning then he coloured it. Look at the face and the hair , it's painted before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted May 29, 2006 Share Posted May 29, 2006 .. He took a drawning then he coloured it. Look at the face and the hair , it's painted before. :shock: Now that you said, I might be in doubt... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imhomer Posted May 29, 2006 Share Posted May 29, 2006 Just did this quicky. It doesn't really match the other bits because I saved it as a PNG instead of a JPG. Colored the skin, eyes, and hair. I think it looks better without all the pencil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Electroguy1 Posted May 29, 2006 Share Posted May 29, 2006 Thats blatantly not just been pixelled theres loads of white space around the head like its been badly rendered. Theres a total contrast of styles as well.... I r teh suspicous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureleader18 Posted May 29, 2006 Share Posted May 29, 2006 hey ur from RR right? whats up. :) nice pose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted May 29, 2006 Share Posted May 29, 2006 Better... But it needs more shading and detail. The eyes look very fixed and cartoony. Do some detail and shading and it could come out real nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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