This is my first real attempt at line work... Comments and tips are extremely welcome =)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i actually like it pretty good

 

 

 

7/10! :)

Pretty cool, the grungey bg and the lines blend well together

The linework at the top is a bit messy. Also try blending your linework into the bg.

Linework looks alot better if its faded, or blended into the BG. Not bad though. :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Yea, a faded look would make it look better. Experiment to see what looks best.

pretty cool, might look better if faded

I tried again, hope its better :S

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think i did a bit too much lol :lol:

try fading a tiny bit more .. .see if it looks better

The second attempt looks much better than the first though I like the style of the first and if the lines were faded, it would look good.

The 2nd one is good, but bit to heavy. Nice work!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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