imadevil Posted August 15, 2004 Share Posted August 15, 2004 This is my first real attempt at line work... Comments and tips are extremely welcome =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_ice Posted August 15, 2004 Share Posted August 15, 2004 i actually like it pretty good 7/10! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iPee freely Posted August 15, 2004 Share Posted August 15, 2004 Pretty cool, the grungey bg and the lines blend well together Hacked, gaining none buy-able skills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted_Hero Posted August 15, 2004 Share Posted August 15, 2004 The linework at the top is a bit messy. Also try blending your linework into the bg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firestorm667 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Linework looks alot better if its faded, or blended into the BG. Not bad though. :wink: :twisted: F!r3$70r/\/\ :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demoris Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Yea, a faded look would make it look better. Experiment to see what looks best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grandma_twinki Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 pretty cool, might look better if faded Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imadevil Posted August 16, 2004 Author Share Posted August 16, 2004 I tried again, hope its better :S I think i did a bit too much lol :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemad11 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 try fading a tiny bit more .. .see if it looks better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest 0bscure Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 The second attempt looks much better than the first though I like the style of the first and if the lines were faded, it would look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firestorm667 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 The 2nd one is good, but bit to heavy. Nice work! :twisted: F!e3$70r/\/\ :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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