Be harsh. I want to know every little thing I did wrong =).

Harsh :twisted:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyways, can't really make out wut the picture is...

the back ground is just a few brush strokes. at least thats what it looks like to me

I layered like 3 different backgrounds then put a charcoal coat over all of it =P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe that will clear that up for you guys.

background needs work . .animation is ok . ..

I dont like the hobo bob font :x :shock:

Dont like font.

 

 

 

Too light.

I'll see what i can do.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I can't seem to change the background.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

All I can do is change the text, but I think it looks a little better.

your last one was better . .

 

 

 

also . . .add more frames to the animation .. its choppy

i still lik ur old text better :roll: donno maybe it's just me

first one was better i meant . .. i dunno why i say last one was better. . :roll:

More frames? This will cut close

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It barely makes size reqs now..but it's not choppy!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Omfg it doesn't!!

put the text back to how it was before (the original) .. it looked much better . .and add more frames like u did in the last one u just put

Ok I'll try that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

See criticism is good!! =)

don't worry bout file size. . just fix it up . .and i'll shrink it for ya ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Font changed =)

one word describes is all

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

P L A I N

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

add more stuff and color light blue can hurt your eyes

one word describes is all

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

P L A I N

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

add more stuff and color light blue can hurt your eyes

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like plain lol. I hate sigs with too much going on. Adding more color in sigs destroys them IMO. =P

I'd say the last 1 is best, and the first one is second best...the two inbetween aren't very appealing to me...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm not too fond of any of the fonts though...their all too digital for the BG IMO

THe issue with that is..I would rather have a basic font for the name, but then it wouldn't mesh well with the phrase below it. Any tips to that end?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Is this an improvement for the text?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I want to change the bottom text, but I have no idea what I'd change it to.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Font changed =)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

centralize it.

don't center... keep it the way it is