June 22, 200422 yr Lyrical poem sort of. Also posted on my DeviantArt page. Enjoy. Return Sometime today Somewhere far away Someone's saying quietly Something to me Tomorrow the day after Tonight little laughter I want you forever to stay But it just can't be that way Just don't tear my heart Don't drive my love apart I've worked so hard always Just to keep you safe And now you're leaving me With tears for eternity Just somehow, someway Find a way to stay... Sometime tonight Somewhere in the light Someone's saying quietly Something to me Tomorrow the years gone by Today the more I cry I want you back here But it just adds another tear Just don't tear my heart Don't drive my love apart I've worked so hard always Just to keep you safe And now you've left me With tears for eternity Just somehow, someway Find a way to stay... Adventurer's Log || YouTube || Facebook || Tip.it Times Work || Wanna Join the Editorial Panel?Maxed Out 01 October 2012 PDT
June 23, 200422 yr Author Thats very good, are you studying English Lit? :oops: At the moment no, but I will be taking a class similar to that sometime next year I think.. depending on how the courses work out. :? Adventurer's Log || YouTube || Facebook || Tip.it Times Work || Wanna Join the Editorial Panel?Maxed Out 01 October 2012 PDT
June 23, 200422 yr Very beautiful. Your very discriptive in your poetry, it helps paint a picture that goes along very good with the words. :) If it isn't in your veins, you'll never know.
June 29, 200422 yr wow very nice......... reminds me of something i cant think of this moment........ well anyways very nice 100/10
June 29, 200422 yr Beautiful Forsaken. I give it a 9/10 simply because it was great enough to get my attention (Not much for poems, mainly stories.)
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