keden16 Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 you guys something.. http://www.deviantart.com/view/34432318/ hope you all like it =) Join Phantom Designs now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirHartlar Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 :shock: That is really good, although I hope it never happens IRL! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 It's nice... Like the planet the most... The background is.. Erh... Bleh... The main beam is too thick, and the curvy beams are too... symettrical and repetitive... The bottom isn't that good either.. Smudged dots... But out sideways? Surely it should be from he centre of the impact? =\ Sorry for pointing all the negative parts out, but I don't like it much. Oh, and you used a tutorial, didn't you? Seen one for this before... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keden16 Posted June 29, 2006 Author Share Posted June 29, 2006 lol thanks =P Btw I made it all myself OH NOESIES! I made it all myself... And the dots are from the littlebeams, wich actually should look like a spiral ;) Join Phantom Designs now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 Yes, but they don't because it's repetitive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keden16 Posted June 29, 2006 Author Share Posted June 29, 2006 Anyway thanks for the comment, always helps to get better =) Join Phantom Designs now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4be2jue Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 I really like the colours and the effect that it gives. i am no professional but i wonder what it would look like with a border. for your first attempt i think its spot on, your on the right track. Visit My Signature Shop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 I really like the colours and the effect that it gives. i am no professional but i wonder what it would look like with a border. for your first attempt i think its spot on, your on the right track. What the...? The border is like 50 pixels thick... WTP??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_k0m0d0_ Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 Wow, nice I love this kind of Space Art! 8/10! :3> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4be2jue Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 sorry i didnt have my glasses on opps i still like it Visit My Signature Shop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_OnE Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 The background could've used a bit more variation, it seemed too boring to me. As for the beam, follow Gold's advice. Other than this, it looks like really nice work. You'll fit right in here at the Gallery. Oh, and welcome to TIF! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RcS89 Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 The beam seems too 'samey'... And the Circle of light spreading on the planet is too circular, and doesnt match the planet. It shouldn't be perfectly circular, but should be stretched out to both the left and right... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keden16 Posted June 30, 2006 Author Share Posted June 30, 2006 lool it's fantasy, so it 'shouldn't' be anything ;) But thanks anyway Join Phantom Designs now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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