The Warmaker

[MC_Kejml]

Comment.I have written 4 books of 250 pages and i wanna become a writer :P

 

So ill try to put up a story of ... you'll see.

 

(btw.im Czech , so try to pass over some gramatical errors :oops: )

 

 

 

Prologue

 

 

 

A man is standing on those barren, empty wastes of the Wilderness.He has a stern, sad look on his face , showing that he has done everything he could for some worthy cause.

 

 

 

Still,in the back of his mind , he knows that there is still hope for him yet.

 

He wields a huge runite warhammer , and his body is covered by his old ,

 

used, but highly favored by him , adamantine armor.

 

 

 

The remnants of Brotherhood of Black medium helm and Lords of runescape are shattered all over the place. He senses great grief , but revenge - at last.

 

 

 

Though , desecrated lands and perished clans is not everything he sees.

 

He also sees the leader of Lords of Runescape.

 

His great friend , companion , and a mighty archmage.The upcoming events are going to be very interesting.

 

 

 

But well .. we started a little fast.

 

 

 

...

 

 

 

Great times require great heroes to rise.From farmsteads rise brave knights , that are willing to defend their crops once and for all , from the dark alleys are the greatest thieves born, and from standing armies are promoted the most brightest of generals.

 

 

 

Though , not everything may look up so nice now.

 

The city of Varrock is infested by some strange plague , and the entire city is quarantined.

 

Funeral pyres are lining all over the streets , and plague victims are everywhere.

 

Some joined the army - some died , some just went mad.

 

 

 

And even from these horrible times heroes rise. A one just did, but he doesn't even know it now.

 

MC Kejml.

 

The Vigilant , Evil , and charismatic warrior.

 

 

 

(0:42 here now.Gotta get some sleep , i will write more today :) )

[MC_Kejml]

Chapter 1 - Crusade

 

 

 

So ... we have been brought here.

 

I , as the one of the squires of Sir Wyvin of Falador , was very upset about this mission - the city was quarantined at last.

 

Though , I didn't thought that the Silver Knights would make some kind of ''crusade'' into Varrock.

 

 

 

And who am I ?

 

 

 

Well ... I am MC Kejml, a former warrior from Falador.

 

Warrior..hm,oficcialy some kind of squire for Sir Wyvin , but who would mind this stuff. I was fighting primarily for myself. Everything I have fought were some minor skirmishes against animals attacking our herds , some gladiator battles that we were making with our training instructors .. nothing really hard , I think.

 

Everything that we knights should be made of , as the high autorites say , of some ''pride and glory'' . Well ,I don't think that is bad at all, but as I said before, I haven't joined the White Knights to gain some of these very platonic values...

 

Just to have someone to fight with ... lonewolf style hasn't suited me well.

 

You must mind my name , why I am called MC Kejml. Well , MC is because of some cultural achievements i was making in the years of peace, and Kejml ? My old friend and companion Kick always called me Kejml. I don't know why , for what reason , but maybe for my normal name , Kamil. Yea, it's similar to the legendary ''Karil'' , as people say.

 

 

 

So ... as I mentioned before , we have been brought here.

 

A squad of White Knights was sent to this plague-infested city of Varrock to find the reason of plague and to put it to end.

 

It looked pretty suicidal for me .. still , as a member of White Knights , and Sir Wyvin 's platoon , I must have taken this trip , or I would be considered deserted and MIA , which is rewarded by death.

 

There were about ... 35 of us. Some archers , few mages , but primarily fighters and warriors.

 

In this cold , dark night , everything could have happened , so it was great to have various classes with us.

 

We were led by Sir Wyvin himself , which has undertook this assignment and I assumed him very courageous for this. But well , it was his and Sir Amik Varze's duty to keep peace all over of Asgarnia and Misthalin.

 

Sir Wyvin:''Remember ! Stick together , we don't know what dangers may lurk in this city ! And now , to the important matter.

 

You probably haven't heard of ''Chaosdragon''.

 

Chaosdragon is a faction in Varrock , led by some man called Wolfenzi.

 

We do not know much about Chaosdragon , but rumors say that Chaosdragon is the creator of the plague. That may be true , but it hasn't to , because our intelligence and spies haven't uncovered anything about this ''Chaosdragon,, . They must be too well organized not to become caught by our spies , or they just do not exist.

 

Still. Keep your eyes wide open. Everyone clear ? ,,

 

We:''SIR , YES , SIR !!! ,,

 

Sir Wyvin :''So , we have to go now.FORM UP !!!,,

 

Sir Wyvin jumped off the huge rock he was standing on when he was talking to us, and we started to form behind him.

 

We were formed in some box - like formation , 7 lines of 5 people.

 

 

 

As we were continuing to Varrock , i smelled the stench of the plague for meters. If it is THIS big , we may not find a cure at all.

 

And , there were the gates.

 

Sir Wyvin:''Jakubisko , Newermind ! Back me up !,,

 

This was the first time he called someone with names knights were calling each other.He must heavily rely on team spirit or he just doesn't want to follow the army's boring distinghuishness here. But no , he would never do a thing like that, I'm not that mad to believe in it.

 

 

 

Sir Wyvin knocked on a small wooden window , and someone opened it after a short time.

 

Gate guard:''What do you want here ?,,

 

Sir Wyvin:''You do not recognize me ??? I am Sir Wyv - ,,

 

Gate guard:''Oh ! Pardon my mistake , sir ! I havent recognized you so fast !I Will open the gate for you now, but be warned . This plague is a deadly one indeed - and pretty aggressive,too. Keep your helms on , and never take them off until you get yourself a facemask.,,

 

Sir Wyvin:''You heard that , soldiers ! Never take your helms off !!,,

 

Sir Wyvin got his backpack off, and took a helm with angelic wings from it.

 

Then , he put it on. He looked magnificently in it - it suited him perfectly . And , he was easily identifyable , too.

 

 

 

The gate opened and I wasn't as shocked as i presumed. The streets were absolutely empty.

 

We walked into the city with some disbelief - everyone expected plague victim pyres , shattered buildings , people dying in the streets , doomsayers , sad militia, desperate people ... you name it.

 

I don't know if I wasnt mind - tricked , but i have seen nothing . Nothing , just shapes of buildings and darkness all around.

 

The gate smashed behind us , and from this point , I knew there is no way back.Not that I wouldn't knew it before.

 

Sir Wyvin:''Keep your eyes wide open , soldiers.And follow me - we will proceed to the castle now.,,

 

We followed Sir Wyvin , but a thought sharp as a razor was slicing through my mind. WHY are the streets so empty ???? darn ......

 

Then .. it came so fast ...

 

Knight:''ENEMY IN FRONT !!!!,,

 

From the darkness attacked an angry mob , and archers appeared on the rooftops of nearby buildings.

 

Sir Wyvin:''DEFEND YOURSELF!!!!!!!,,

 

I grabbed my steel longsword ...

 

 

 

-End of part 1

[MC_Kejml]

Chapter 2 - Noble berserker

 

 

 

I knew it.

 

First great battle.

 

 

 

...

 

 

 

The battle is joined.

 

 

 

I grabbed for my steel longsword and my steel kiteshield.

 

Archers on the rooftops started firing and the mob crashed into us ... i reflexively put the shield above my head to block the arrows , though no arrows has impacted on it as well.

 

Mages and rangers started to fire back ,and it was my chance to prove myself in a fight.I ran through the defending knights to the scene of battle - a warrior just pounced at me from the grievous battle.

 

The warrior was wearing a black - red robe , as all other attackers did - this must be definitely some organized faction , and the first thing that came on my mind was ... Chaosdragon ?

 

The warrior started swinging with his mithril flail , and i was evading hits for most of the time. I saw his ugly grin , as he was pushing me back.

 

I collected myself and made a lunge on him - as i thought , the longsword hit him in his stomach - but he was not about to fall.He grabbed for something into his pocket , but I am not that dumb to do not expect a surprise from a foe...i dropped my shield and rolled with the sword , completely ransacking the enemy 's stomach.

 

I quickly pulled my sword from his body as he fell into the ground.

 

My first foe , dead, by my hand. Great !

 

Great , yes. I will not grieve for the loss of someone's father or son.He went the bad way , thus he was rewarded accordingly.

 

In distance , I saw Sir Wyvin fending of multiple attackers...time to impress an authority ! ....

 

I ran to him , getting my longsword ready , completely abandoning my kiteshield behind me. I felt ... I wont need it anymore.Not sure why , but it was my instinct.

 

As Sir Wyvin 's attackers were preparing to attack , circling around him , i quickly stabbed one of his attackers in his back , pulling him down in a tie by other hand.

 

Me:''Now THIS is backstabbing!,,

 

Sir Wyvin:''Kejml ?! Get away, this is a question of valor !''

 

Me:''Exactly.''

 

The first attacker stimbled down with blood pouring from his body in front and back alike ... so I pulled off my sword from him , when something huge impacted on my back.

 

I felt pain , but I knew that my armor absorbed most of the damage.The impact knocked me down,still I moved on my back and saw the attacker - one of their warriors , but looking as high authority , he had black and red platemail with red trims over the arms.He was wielding adamantine warhammer , ready to crush me. When he swung the warhammer on me , I rolled to the left , and the warhammer landed on the city's pavement.I tried to get up , but it was very hard in this heavy armor - the attacker was readying for his second blow , but all that he done was kicking me back onto the cold earth.

 

I fell down , but I seen the foe being attacked, so I got back on my feet - just in time. My enemy has just fought his attacker back and there we were. Me and him. He was overconfidant though, so he just charged , swinging his warhammer in my direction , but I evaded his charge... and now , I looked over , and great anger was seething me . I have seen fallen friends by some unworthy attacker , and the one in front of me had to be their leader - only one of them was wielding a plate mail - that was my enemy.A great anger just overcame my mind ... this will not be tolerated !! I will not be played with by him !!!!!!

 

Attacker:''So , what are you now going to do ,cur ?''

 

I charged on him , with my head full of anger ... he just readied his warhammer in defending position , but not I nor him had expected this.

 

Me:''HEADLESS BUTCHER !!!''

 

Enemy:''What the - ''

 

I started completely destroying my foe - as I was swinging , I always hit something , the air around was full of him , armor and flesh alike . I felt unholy rage , but his destruction was the satisfaction of it.

 

My foe fell , desecrated , on the earth , and there was no cliging of armor and weapons around. It was only me , noisely breathing , with thoughts of rage running throughout my head.

 

 

 

The battle was over.

 

 

 

End of chapter 2.

 

COMMENT PLEASE :) I would like to continue , but I don't know if you like it.

[Androctonus]

fan fics are always nice, keep up the good work

[planoboy93]

omg great story next part asap please!!

[liiiam]

nice story

[Zonorhc]

Unless you're writing a script, there's no reason to write speech as:

 

 

 

Person: "Blah blah blah."

 

 

 

It's a lot more effective in prose to write it as:

 

 

 

Person said, "Blah blah blah."; or

 

"Blah blah blah," said Person.

 

 

 

Also, mind spaces around your punctuation. A comma only has a space after it, not before.

[InkofDeath]

good write and good detail i'll ignore some grammer errors just for that...anyways keep writing...

[planoboy93]

Unless you're writing a script, there's no reason to write speech as:

 

 

 

Person: "Blah blah blah."

 

 

 

It's a lot more effective in prose to write it as:

 

 

 

Person said, "Blah blah blah."; or

 

"Blah blah blah," said Person.

 

 

 

Also, mind spaces around your punctuation. A comma only has a space after it, not before.

its great the way it is and if you didn't read the top of the 1st post it said there cztech and to excuse some grammer mistakes

[Zonorhc]

Grammar I can understand, but punctuation? No. There should be no problems with it at all. I'm sure writing it in Czech does not make it look like a play script, either.

 

 

 

Use those quotation marks properly.

 

 

 

There's even an announcement about this.