its one of my personal bests and i notice i keep gettin better, its my third one, so please tell me what u think about it , rate 1 - 10 thanks :)

not to bad 6 /10 :)

Line work is kinda good. Its an improvment from your current one. He looks blocky. Clouds don't look right. 5/10 :)

put allot more shading in the character

Well it's not something close to the top...however along with what written above i'd say the first thing i though watching this was...the guy's arm must be broken in 3 places :shock:

 

 

 

fix it. And stay closer to human anatomy maybe...that looks a bit like an ape.

 

 

 

Another suggestion...and this is probably the best one is...

 

 

 

give the sig a meaning...a story or some kind of soul.

 

 

 

However way better than your current sig. Keep it up

 

 

 

6-/10

Ehm, pretty nice, but:

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  [*:tpvd9jzw]Text color should be changed.
   
   
   
  [*:tpvd9jzw]Try shading.
   
   
   
  [*:tpvd9jzw]Try to fill it some more.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

6.5/10

k thanks for comments everyone , anyone else?

u got a nice layout .. all you need to do is fix up his arm lol .. cuz its bent funny and add shading ..then it should own. .

 

 

 

6/10 ;)

 

 

 

fix it up and we'll see how it looks :)