hey, first off the vector, comments, cc, whatever, but no flames.... (they really need to get a fire extunguisher weilding smiley)

 

 

 

 

 

 

and next up for you lovely people to see, is the APSUB (anti pillow shading under banner)

 

 

 

 

edit: woppsie, posted the wrong one, here it is, dimentions are 450*50 pixels, 5kb

 

 

 

comments cc on all of them, and ofcorse you may use the latter of the two =D

 

 

 

PJB21

It's a start..

 

 

 

Shes too skinny, and her face looks long and droopy.

 

Other then that =D> .

 

I've never seen/tryed a vector.

that face would make van gogh cut his nose off :^o

 

hahaha sorry lol

 

 

 

but its decent..it looks like you took a huge shortvut on the head though, and on the muscle definition and curves...and it really shows through... extra time perfecting things REALLY shows through

 

 

 

oh and her neck is humangous

woops, didnt post the underbanner, but its here now for you all to see =)

 

 

 

you know why it looks so skinny?, well its cause when i watch widescreen movies its on a normal screen so its all squashed up =P nah, its just how i draw people, its my style =)

 

 

 

i agree the neck is rather large =S i think ill need to change that in future images lol.

 

 

 

when doing noses, on girls mainly this is relevent to, i dont think that normal size noses look well, personaly i think that girls are sorta tall and thin structure, while guys are more stocky, but still tall, its just how i draw and it is reflected in my work :wink:

 

 

 

what you [depaxes] said about the time thiung is probably true, however it still took me a while to make (a good hour or two) but that said, i dont really see how using more time can help, i did what i did and thats how it turned out, its like just if i was to do it slower doesnt mean it will be better, it just means i have less of a day left o0

 

 

 

PJB21

i dont know much about vectors, but it looks good in my eyes :D

i dont know much about vectors, but it looks good in my eyes :D

 

 

 

it doesnt matter how much you know, as long as you think it looks good :wink:

 

 

 

and no comments about the UB? oh come on... that took me well, between 10:30 and 11:25, with my dad telling me to get of the computer, enduring all that, just so as i could make this for you only to get it thrown back in my face :cry:

 

 

 

lol,

 

PJB21

You asked for cc, but you expected "Wow, nice", "OMGOMGOMGOMG 11/10".

 

 

 

No-one flamed, just gave their opinions and told you how to make it better.

 

 

 

Personally, take out the icky black lines that are showing bone structure, muscles and crevices.

 

 

 

Also, since the body is fairly anatomically correct. Fairly. You should make the head "fairly" anatomically correct. :P