FIRST PIX/AVATAR pls CC

[pomar1]

 

 

 

Its so low :) Normal i did pics in flash, now i try in paint :D

[megadedhed]

collors are a bit bright...so i would clarify them a bit.... but other than that (and anatomy) it looks ok

[pomar1]

Now better?

[fangoesbrr]

i'd agree, you have used really light colours, arent barrows guys really gloomy, and you need to make it look like he just came out of battle :D

 

 

 

one lil tip too

 

 

 

 

 

use paint.NET for a more variety of colours and brush sizes

[pomar1]

ty.

 

 

 

Can some1 tich me or do sky?

[imhomer]

I'd say you're doing a cartoon style so I won't say anything about the anatomy.

 

 

 

Mainly what I'll talk about is color choice and shading.

 

 

 

The biggest problem I see is that you used dithering to make colors instead of blending colors or making a texture. For example, the shiny spot on the helmet is metal but the dithering makes it look textured like cloth or chainmail. Use colors with less contrast to make smoothing better and reduce the need to dither.

 

 

 

The hand holding the morningstar is unrealistic. It could be held that way but it's much more comfortable for a person to hold it palm down.

 

 

 

I don't get the bulges in front of the guy. To me it looks like the torso is facing toward the viewer but the legs are facing away. :?

 

 

 

I don't understand the shading over the corner of the sun. No offense, but one of the cheeziest things a artist can do is put the sun in a corner and make it a quarter circle. Just put it behind the guy as a smalle circle (maybe 5-6 pixles across).

 

 

 

The lightest part of the grass in the distance hurts my eyes both because of how bright the green is and the dithering. Again, try to use colors that contrast less.

 

 

 

Your colors are very bright. Try going of palette and getting colors with more grey in them.

 

 

 

In short, use less bright colors and colors that contrast each other less to soften the picture to the eye and reduce the need for dithering. Pay a little more attention to anatomy and you should be good.

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: You also asked to do sky. All you need to know is that the sky is lighter near the light source (sun) and darker away from it. Get varying shades of blue and shade with the lightest near the sun and darkest away from the sun.

[pomar1]

In Flash i am making better pics like this one "Verac, now come back to live"

 

The secound Scene from main full film about live of barrows:

 

 

 

[Sir_Alex85]

I like it. Just work on some of the stuff Imhomer said for your next one. ;P