I just finished this today, but it doesn't seem to look right. If anyone could give me advice on how to make it look better it would be much appreciated.

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think it's the white that makes it look strange... Maybe if I blend the red into the white more with different shades?

the letters need to be wider i think...

Mmm maybe, but I think they look alright in my eyes. I'll give it a go, but I don't think it's the letters that are the problem..? Meh, anyone else?

i think the letters are fine, mabye try messing around with the colors? :-k

 

 

 

I think they are a little to bright :XD:

Lol thanks, I'll give these ideas a go. I just put in my favourite colours :oops:. Yeah it is a little hard on the eyes, see what I can do...

Hmm. I like it. I think the problem is the white.. It looks good on the outside, but inbetween the letters, there's too much of it. Like, inbetween the N and I. Or the N and the end of the R. Maybe add some more red in there?

the n looks out of place also the e just looks like a backwards 3

I see what you mean alex, there's a massive gap between the "pri" and the "n". I'm gonna try and close the gap when i have time and see if it looks any better. And thanks for your comment masta, I like the writing and stuff, I do completly agree with alex though, and see no other problems with the lettering. Thanks again!

I think having a cool colored background would be better. Something like a dark blue or a black so that it contrasts the warmness of the letters... I'm not fond of the white outline but w/e...

I can't say I like your style...........at all.....in any way, but I'll try to be objective and give you some pointers.

 

 

 

First off, the execution is excellent. I don't like the style but I understand the letters took some time and skill to make especially with that nice overlap. The border is good and complements the BG nicely. On the topic of BG, it looks uniform until you look closer and see that it's multiple, similar colors, kudos to you =D>.

 

 

 

The blending of colors in the letters is good but looks kind of granular in some places. using a greater variety of colors should help this.

 

 

 

The outside edge of the white area is, frankly, ugly. The bright white colors contrasts too much with the red BG and your eyes are drawn to the white speckles around the edge of the white area and not the words. I'd suggest using a more grey color instead of white.

 

 

 

Finally, there's a lot of white space in the loops of the letters. try adding a few speckles of the red BG or 'holes' in the loops to make it ook less empty.

Lol thanks a lot for comments and such, it has helped me out a lot!! I kinda figured the white was a bit off but couldn't put my finger on what exactly it was. Once I update I will post it again to see if it appears better. Thankyou!!