ctp080188 Posted August 31, 2006 Share Posted August 31, 2006 I just finished this today, but it doesn't seem to look right. If anyone could give me advice on how to make it look better it would be much appreciated. I think it's the white that makes it look strange... Maybe if I blend the red into the white more with different shades? SHH HUT YUH MUH. DERKHED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted August 31, 2006 Share Posted August 31, 2006 the letters need to be wider i think... wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ctp080188 Posted August 31, 2006 Author Share Posted August 31, 2006 Mmm maybe, but I think they look alright in my eyes. I'll give it a go, but I don't think it's the letters that are the problem..? Meh, anyone else? SHH HUT YUH MUH. DERKHED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nubby Posted August 31, 2006 Share Posted August 31, 2006 i think the letters are fine, mabye try messing around with the colors? :-k I think they are a little to bright :XD: ---------------- Some guy gave me a free santa hat ----------------- -------------------------- And an easter egg! ---------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ctp080188 Posted August 31, 2006 Author Share Posted August 31, 2006 Lol thanks, I'll give these ideas a go. I just put in my favourite colours :oops:. Yeah it is a little hard on the eyes, see what I can do... SHH HUT YUH MUH. DERKHED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Alex85 Posted August 31, 2006 Share Posted August 31, 2006 Hmm. I like it. I think the problem is the white.. It looks good on the outside, but inbetween the letters, there's too much of it. Like, inbetween the N and I. Or the N and the end of the R. Maybe add some more red in there? It really has Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
das_masta238 Posted August 31, 2006 Share Posted August 31, 2006 the n looks out of place also the e just looks like a backwards 3 sonicsonaike exellent work ^^abstract lol 98% of teenagers have been drunk or around alcohol. Put this in your signature if you like bagels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ctp080188 Posted September 1, 2006 Author Share Posted September 1, 2006 I see what you mean alex, there's a massive gap between the "pri" and the "n". I'm gonna try and close the gap when i have time and see if it looks any better. And thanks for your comment masta, I like the writing and stuff, I do completly agree with alex though, and see no other problems with the lettering. Thanks again! SHH HUT YUH MUH. DERKHED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No_OnE Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 I think having a cool colored background would be better. Something like a dark blue or a black so that it contrasts the warmness of the letters... I'm not fond of the white outline but w/e... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imhomer Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 I can't say I like your style...........at all.....in any way, but I'll try to be objective and give you some pointers. First off, the execution is excellent. I don't like the style but I understand the letters took some time and skill to make especially with that nice overlap. The border is good and complements the BG nicely. On the topic of BG, it looks uniform until you look closer and see that it's multiple, similar colors, kudos to you =D>. The blending of colors in the letters is good but looks kind of granular in some places. using a greater variety of colors should help this. The outside edge of the white area is, frankly, ugly. The bright white colors contrasts too much with the red BG and your eyes are drawn to the white speckles around the edge of the white area and not the words. I'd suggest using a more grey color instead of white. Finally, there's a lot of white space in the loops of the letters. try adding a few speckles of the red BG or 'holes' in the loops to make it ook less empty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ctp080188 Posted September 1, 2006 Author Share Posted September 1, 2006 Lol thanks a lot for comments and such, it has helped me out a lot!! I kinda figured the white was a bit off but couldn't put my finger on what exactly it was. Once I update I will post it again to see if it appears better. Thankyou!! SHH HUT YUH MUH. DERKHED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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