'Innocence with a Tennisball.'

[woopidoo2]

 

 

 

Another manip, I made the photo and the manipulation itself.

 

 

 

Im quite proud of the photo :mrgreen:

 

 

 

Rate away :thumbsup:

[WeeBoab]

text = sucky

 

 

 

its not your best. by a long shot.

[woopidoo2]

text = sucky

 

 

 

its not your best. by a long shot.

 

 

 

Why is the text sucky... It was supposed to be simple, but old-chique-looking.

[WeeBoab]

the text just doesnt suit it, thats why. the lens flare doesnt fit, and the brown bit looks low qual. the dog is ok, and on the right (door) doesnt look like uve done anything cept the lens flare.

[woopidoo2]

Anymore CC? anyone? (also a bump :mrgreen: )

[cadburys_egg]

I quite like it actually.

 

 

 

 

 

I think the lens flare is a bit too hard though, try slightly blurring it and putting opacity to about 70~90%.

 

 

 

Text is fine, but I don't think it needs a drop shadow.

 

 

 

If I were you, desaturate everything but the tennis ball about 25~40% and saturate the tennis ball an extra ~10%. It focuses the tennis ball then, and since the dog is black and white anyway, it won't take it away from that.

 

 

 

Darken the edges of the photo slightly, either by gradient or just a soft-edged brush. Again, it focuses towards the tennisball and dog.

 

 

 

If you can, slightly darken the window behind the dog. It's quite distracting.

 

 

 

 

 

I whipped up a quick example of what I mean, I won't post it though. If you would like to see the image but with some of my adjustments, PM me. ;)

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, it's a good job. though the fact the dog's head was chopped off due to size limitations, it's still good.

[navyplaya]

The only problems I see are that the wood on the left seems to smooth compared to the rest of the sig, and the text doesnt fit well. But over all good job. =D>